Oh shit, boy I was right when I thought he was pissed boy I'm just glad he didn't make Kagome a puddle of goo.... Wait is he yokai or human in this? Oh well I thought he would be spending time with her at his home for watching out for Rin... Even with his dreaded mood swings. But to call her up on her offer to tutor Rin well hell that's a blessing in disguise now she really can get to know Sesshomaru....
Naraku, ugh such a vile and distorted man... He wants to control Kagome but thankfully Shippo was there to stop him. Loved the thought of disappointment on Naraku's face when Shippo insisted Kagome show him around the school. That was a close call.
Poor Kagome she may not have had a boyfriend but she's not stupid to notice the attraction between Miroku and Sango... LOL Man that piece was good. Always love how did you know.... When no one else notices.... lol so so good.
Oh shit a flat tire, will she be late for her first tutoring session? I wonder who could drive a nice car and walk with a swagger? hm... Bankotsu or maybe Hiten.... Oh forgot Inu Yasha and Koga.... Hmm tough choice I have to read the next chapter to find out who....
Anon Fan (Chapter 4) - Sun 16 Oct 2022
Loving all the innuendos I cant wait to read more
OMG Shame on you Kagome... You're a snoop, I know she wants info but to stoop so low by asking Rin about her life and all is a low blow. Oh Sango and Miroku are hilarious.... Man they crack me up.... At least Kagome kept her promise about playing with Rin.... Oh man Sesshomaru is out for blood finding Rin missing only to come upon her speaking with Kagome no less. Well she wanted to get to know him now she'll be able too.. LOL this was good.
LOL OMG I loved this, that is a new take on the whole Sesshomaru/Kagome stories. Gotta love playful Dobies.... I think they will be around a whole lot more.... Hehe hehe.... I can't wait to see where you go with this.... :)
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sat 15 Oct 2022
Me quito el sombrero ante ti!
Estaba tan triste por Kag pero las cosas giraron hermosamente.
Esa entrada de Koga fué magistral. Justo como en el ánime siempre puedes confiar en que provocará unos celos terribles.
Y Kag reaccionó igual no lo alienta pero tampoco lo detenía. Es tan de ella que solo se sonrojara.
Tambien encanta lo que hiciste con Shippo. El siempre fué muy protector con Kag y en el anime me parecía mucho más perspicaz y maduro que Inuyasha.
Rin la adorable.
Shippo el protector.
Naraku el aterrador.
Y Koga siempre tan confiado en sí mismo . Solo falta que la proclame su mujer.
Ah. Y que Kag le dé parte de su alma a Kikyo. Bueno no eso.
Pero quizás un trasplante me médula?
Las circunstancias y tiempo pueden diferir pero siento que todos están muy en sus personajes.
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