LOL can't believe Sesshomaru a nark.... lol too good. But I do understand if he didn't explain he'd be in trouble or worse possibly unless he's a detective or something working with the patrollers. Well Kagome's lie didn't work once Sesshomaru showed up... So now what will happen.
Ladydot (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Nov 2022
Shabam! What an incredible world and start. I truly can't wait to read more and see where this goes!
Salvör (Chapter 3) - Fri 11 Nov 2022
This is starting out as a really interesting story. The plot is refreshing in a way even though there are many stories out there with similar plots but you don't get everything on a silver platter all at once so you leave me feeling so very curious. The flow is good and it's not too fast paced so good job! I am looking forward to the next chapter :)
OMG.... You're back... Thank you, thank you love this story and this chapter was great.... This is one fic that makes the future seem possible well without the demons... But in this story its awesome I think Kagome needs to grow a backbone though she's appears to skittish and reserved. One question though are they able to remove the suppressors if their life is in danger? I hope things come to light about the demons and why one was stalking Kagome. In any case I was happy to see a new chapter and I loved it. Wait until Takeda takes off her helmet, I believe its Sango. I wonder if Miroku still has a wondering hand. LOL Can't wait to read more. Update soon.
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Jessie (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 Oct 2022
Oh very interesting hope you continue this story:)
Lauren (Chapter 2) - Tue 23 Aug 2022
So this is interesting. An AU where the world is completely altered and dystopian punk while retaining a lot of its industrial era aesthetics
neelixo (Chapter 2) - Thu 18 Aug 2022
I love stories set into the future or seem futuristic. It just always helps build the world a bit more in my head. Definitely looking forward to updates! Very fun so far.
Oh this is so exciting poor Kagome wonder why she didn't use her reiki is she's a level seven.... She must have forgotten... Miroku is still Miroku in this that's good. So Sesshomaru is like a detective or some type of protector for him to go and save her... Wonder when someone will tell her that it is her life that is in danger and what could be the possible reason... Can't wait to read more...
Wow that was certainly something new....
I loved it. Can't wait to read more.
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