Still a great story though I thought there would be some changes I haven't noticed any yet.... Still oh so good.
Uh, yeah of course Kagome likes yo me dominated. She enjoys the "forbidden sex"
I understand if it's hard to admit, but like this woman needs to get over herself. Did she honestly think Sesshomaru would be like, "yeah, take my child and let Inuyasha raise him" ????
I feel bad for Inuyasha. He's the sap in all of this. I'm glad Sesshomaru is being more forceful. Cause she's literally just playing with both of them.
Maybe Sesshomaru should just leave her for a bit, go find some other chick and see how Kagome likes it.
witty (Chapter 25) - Sat 03 Sep 2022
"The father of your child". The scream that I let out was unholy :D Kagome deserved that. I am kind of tired of her having filthy sex with Sesshomaru then running away like he's the bad guy.
Kagome is selfish. So is sesshomaru but at least he owns it.
Amai (Chapter 25) - Sat 03 Sep 2022
A show of indignation is the only viable line of defence execution wise for women no matter how ineffective it is in yielding the desired results.
Why is kagome's anger not self-directed already ? he wouldnt be able to exploit her so efficiently if there werent some weakness present in her to begin with. You simply cannot wage war without acknowledging your shortcomings first so they can be compensated/accounted for by other means.
Bluntly speaking, Kagome spends too much time blaming others rather than acknowledging her streak for recklessness.
I want Sesshomaru's feathers to be ruffled already. The one-sided effective barb targetting is getting old. Bite the dog where he atleast looses some of his cool please.
Kathy (Chapter 24) - Sat 03 Sep 2022
Um.. what
UGGH!! I love that you're drawing out the scene via their emotions - "not a chore", I thiiiink I may have an idea what he's hinting at but I can't wait to read more XD
witty (Chapter 24) - Thu 01 Sep 2022
Let me guess...It was a chore whenever Inuyasha asked :P Now how would Sesshomaru know that unless he frequently watched Kagome and Inu have sex.
Also, what dignity? Kagome. Be serious.
ink142 (Chapter 24) - Thu 01 Sep 2022
"Not a chore for you"... I too am also puzzling over this remark! Also slightly apprehensive about what comes next now that Kagome is leaving the love nest haha... looking forward to seeing where you go next!
ink142 (Chapter 23) - Thu 01 Sep 2022
Truthfully I have never thought about Sesshoumaru's toes, or bare feet for that matter: your description was too cute and just how I would expect them to be! Thank you for posting another chapter :)
witty (Chapter 23) - Wed 31 Aug 2022
Sesshomaru licked her clean? Oh my.
Kagome is truly insufferable!! Sesshomaru is giving her everything she's ever wanted but denied herself. Her "whorish" thoughts are her real desires that Inuyasha couldn't fulfill. I'm guessing a part of her 'growth' will be her actually participating in one of these romps instead of acting like she's being forced.
Oh boy! She fell in love with Sesshomaru. And she's married to another man... This is gonna be hard for Kagome, Sesshomaru and Inuyasha.
Kathy (Chapter 22) - Tue 23 Aug 2022
Did she just pass out or did he choke her to that pt?
witty (Chapter 22) - Mon 22 Aug 2022
Yes, Kagome. What's happened between the two of you was inevitable but in a way she started this madness and Sesshomaru finished it.
The similarities between her and Kikyo are still there. "Just a woman..." Kikyo wanted to be an ordinary woman too.
Amai (Chapter 21) - Fri 19 Aug 2022
Ok.
First she decides her childless state is the reason her marriage is screwed up. No doubt she has been taunted by inuyasha for not bearing one in a roundabout or blunt manner. As if a child fixes spousal compatibility problems right ?
Second she decides to solve a marital issue by asking her half brother in law who her husband quite strongly detests to help her out with baby making thinking it'll be ok to lie to her husband and raise the child in that manner.
Third she actually goes through with the plan. (No fear here or maybe there was and i missed it)
Fourth she continues the deed even after her pregnancy is confirmed and all the self loathing has manifested even in this ultimate desire culmination or exorcism. Bitch cant decide whether she wants to come or bwarf in her fear of discovering the horny side.
This kagome is an idiota and the only understandable emotion felt by her is the fear element.
Fear dictates everything for THE time travelling shikon miko and i fail to see how Seeshomaru would be attracted to such a wretched creature unless he is as convoluted as her in the head.
In response to your AN: I'd be surprised if it was anything but :)
Also, great update.
Kaylah (Chapter 21) - Thu 18 Aug 2022
It's pretty clear that he is in love with her. He's trying to show her that she could have so much more than what Inuyasha has to offer. Not just sexually either.
ink142 (Chapter 21) - Wed 17 Aug 2022
"Author's note: For the sake of 100% transparency, this is a smutty, angsty, slow-burn fic. Emphasis on the ANGST. Emphasis on the SLOW-BURN. Double-emphasis on the SMUT."
Haha it's like you're writing the perfect story. Thank you for keeping this one going! Can't wait to see how this one plays out.
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