Wow... what the heck are you doing kagome?! Poor Sesshomaru...
Well...as always, great sex and chemistry with the emotional/mental/physical build up. The lead in, the build up, and climaxes are phenomenal and very inspirational. Feeling repeatitive even though each erotic and sexual scenerio brings us a new kink or scenerio. Kagome is getting annoying...however, perhaps this is te mentally challenging and evolving relationship between K&S, but it feels like it's been going on for awhile. The complexities of the mindset of being married even though it's the Feudal Era. Inuyaha is clueless and posessive. Sesshoumaru is clueless but determined. I know it's part of the story telling process and clearly the preganancy build up as we move along the storyline takes time and momentum, so I'm in for the long haul. Love to hate this story and hate to love. I have so many conflicting emotions when reading and in the long run thats really a great thing to make the reader have so many raging thoughts and emotions. I am compelled to keep reading because of the characterizations. All the feels if that is what you are going for. Excellent lemons and insights on that erotic, beastial, carnal side of human vs. youkai.
Honeyque (Chapter 57) - Thu 18 May 2023
How long can she keep this up! This is the most pitiful I have ever read about her and Sesshoumaru. Great story, however hopefully something gives soon.
Kathy (Chapter 57) - Thu 18 May 2023
I love this. I don't know why she just doesn't end it. Like it's not fair to any of them.
Oh so good, still feel bad for Sesshomaru even more when the pup comes... Oh and Inu Yasha fleeing like he did shows how much of a coward he is.... Only to return saying “You’ve finally cooled off, huh?” man I'd slap him one if I were Kagome what an ass...
Kathy (Chapter 56) - Sat 13 May 2023
I read your story on both platforms. And it's still not enough
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 55) - Thu 04 May 2023
Que cansancio siempre lo mismo Inuyasha se va Sesshomaru se queda y hay el tira y afloja se está poniendo un poco pesada haber si pasa algo mas interesante
Nooch (Chapter 55) - Thu 04 May 2023
I knew she wasn't going to be able to hold out much longer
but in the hut im scaried for them now bc the scent...
this story got me in a choke hold lol
I can't remember where Inu Yasha went because he was scared to have sex with Kagome thinking he'd hurt the baby. Now he's been gone over a day and Sesshomaru knows Kagome is in need but won't help her in that department until she tells him what she wants or needs... I can't believe she is an idiot.... lol anyway great chapter.
Nooch (Chapter 54) - Fri 28 Apr 2023
OMG I can't wait for the NEXT CHAPTER.. This is tooo good
Kathy (Chapter 54) - Wed 26 Apr 2023
This part made me laugh
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 54) - Wed 26 Apr 2023
No se cual es peor ella por ser tan hipocrita y el por ser tan despreocupado cuando estan juntos , y Sesshomaru por ser tan idiota tenia que dejarla sola pare ver como se apaña ya que Inuyasa se escaquea cuando lo necesita
Oh hahaahaa ha haa Sesshomaru did warned her, but Kagome failed to see the point.... And now it Inu Yasha running off to be saved from Kagome's advances.
Tai (Chapter 53) - Thu 13 Apr 2023
Loved this chapter!! And the story overall. Thanks for writing
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 53) - Thu 13 Apr 2023
no es justo que esta historia valla por el capitulo 74 en FICAHOLOC y aquí en dokuga valla por el capitulo 53 y actualices con cuenta gotas que desilusion
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 53) - Thu 13 Apr 2023
VALLA QUE EMBARAZO MAS LARGO CUANTO MAS VA HA DURAR, QUE MORRO TIENE INUYASHA COMO SE LAVA LAS MANOS DE TODO
Oh man Sesshomaru was about to plow into Inu Yasha for decking him if Kagome didn't give him that look Inu would been half way to China and like a coward afraid of a bit of purifying bite he tells Sesshomaru to do it making Kagome a bit upset because he wouldn't do it for her.... When she declared him family Kagome didn't know what she was in for.... But like I said before she's like a revolving door that never stops..... lol
So well written, but I'm still not sure where this story is leading forward, I'm almost aggravated with all characters, but in a good way because you have written them so well. I've visited your other site and you're extremely accomplished with this pairing and side emotional experiences, but this story, it really has me on hinges, and perhaps that is your agenda. I'm not sure if I'm in love or hate with everyone, but I am completely obessessed following the story no matter how agitated and upset I become with the characaters. It truly makes me feel.
Confused but interested,
Maiven
I hope Inuyasha does not get to raise this kid. He is like s spoiled brat child in this story. Every chapter I want him to find out the kid is not his, so he can go away.
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