Beautiful.
This is the kinda dubcon I like: "We don't want to... but we must." ; ) super hot! fav chapter so far, and i'm excited for what's to come (or who.)
Kagome sure took to her role, and sess's response to it was great too. I love their little banter. Things are moving quickly!
Excellent chapter... Not sure what they're gonna do now, but I look forward to finding out! So glad you're posting again so soon!!
PS - Flames aren't allowed in reviews on our site, so unless it is constructive criticism, let me know if anyone posts anything offensive.
Thanks so much for continuing to post here!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
anika (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Mar 2022
Entretenido fic. Que pasara ahora?
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Tue 08 Mar 2022
Ahhhhh I love this chapter so much
Oh no! What bad luck! I think he did them both a favor. I really like this story so far. Update soon please!
Nicole (Chapter 4) - Tue 08 Mar 2022
Love it!! Thanks for another update! I couldn't. Stop laughing kagome acting skills.
nicole (Chapter 3) - Mon 07 Mar 2022
Wow....this a very interesting story! I cant wait to see what happens next. Very well written
susie (Chapter 3) - Mon 07 Mar 2022
Lol! the image of them hitting the ground in the well is too funny XD. and more fun with powers, yay!
Setup complete? Does that mean... I did enjoy the fluff, and i'm ready for the rest, thank you.
You know, VfD is my favorite fic, and it always amused and amazed me that the entire 40+ chapter epic began as an intended oneshot lol. Incredible.
susie (Chapter 2) - Sun 06 Mar 2022
oooh, bodyswap! kinda lol. sounds like they get to keep their genders and traits, but adopted the race and power from one another?
i love your take on their powers, and the way you describe as they feel them. I am glad they are going back to the future, and excited to see what happens there. sesshoumaru's confoundment of her behavior is gold. like he can't fathom that she wouldn't kill him if she could lol. looks like they already have some trust going, and i look forward to seeing them help eachother with their new power, and what it will feel like.
from sess's little inner monologue, it sounds like its going to be a good time XD
susie (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Mar 2022
Ah, SO lovely to see you again so soon XD You made my day right off the bat! I got excited that Sesshoumaru might come to her (our?) time to reap havok. something tells me he won't let that one slide, hehe.
Love the set up, love the descriptions, love the characters - and your portrayal. DON'T love sessrin, but for some reason, i don't mind when she persues it and he shuts that sh*t down right away. And he nipped that in the bud preemptively- like, noooope. lol. looks like we might have some inu/rin maybe? if so, he is being very mature about it. seems like that would stick in his craw... so i find it hilarious! some subtle revenge, perhaps = ))
Again, so happy you're back with us! Hope you love writing for these 2 again. I know we'll love reading it, and i'm syked for the journey. Very much looking forward to the hot filthy smut, and excited to see where this goes!
witty (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 Mar 2022
Rin X Sesshomaru is distrubing to me as well. I always thought she should've ended up with Inuyasha (after she grew up) or kohaku (popular pairing). Kagome wanting to stay in her time is a new concept as well. Most people make Kagome desperate to return to the past or that she hates the future. I really enjoyed this first chapter!
HiJudeau (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 Mar 2022
Ahhhh you're back!!! I always love your stories(??ω??)??
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