A lovely story. I admit I was confused and frustrated often while reading due to a dying curiosity of where the build up was leading to or what the verbal dodging was all about. Well played there. You endeavored to deliver a complex plot and you did it dashingly. I hope you continue writing.
Aw, willfully obtuse kagome. i'm so glad she came around ;)
I'm so happy you finished this story. it was so sweet and thoughtful, and i feel very grateful to you for sharing it! You've written some of my favorite fics, many that i've read several times over the last 15 or so years, so when i saw you had a whole new story for us, I about fell out of my chair. I still have you in my alerts, so when you popped up in my email i was very excited!
I love their banter here. The back and forth, the dancing, bamf kagome, funny/pervy sango and miroku, and good old insightful, honerable, naughty a-hole dog himself. working together, fighting together, taking care of each other... you write these two so well, and i just love seeing how you make them play off each other. its always a treat, and i will always be here for it! Also, gotta give a nod to Assassin's Seduction, its so hilarious and hot, which isn't always an easy balance to make lol. But you killed it!
anyway, thanks again! amazing to see you, glad you are well, hope to see you again! can't gush enough <3 don't be a stranger.
PS: oh, and i never call out typos in fics, but this one was so amazingly hilarious that i woke my husband up i was laughing so hard:
"It was like he was peeing into her very soul." your words, not mine lololol i friggin died. okay, that's all!
susie (Chapter 6) - Sun 13 Feb 2022
what an awesome fight scene. kagome is such a badass!
you are the master of climactic kisses. i can't wait to see how it ends <3
susie (Chapter 5) - Sun 13 Feb 2022
Drunk Sesshoumaru!! You're checking all my boxes here lol.
How he is so scary and so adorable all at once? My husband is just obnoxious when he drinks XD
susie (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Feb 2022
Sweet LORD! That dance scene!!!
The dancing, the banter, the climactic end to the party... I have no words, I'm sorry.
Love me a hot dance scene, what can I say?
favorite chapter so far. 11/10.
susie (Chapter 3) - Sun 13 Feb 2022
Sesshoumaru is so cryptic. I love that she can trip him up lol.
Him really considering her honesty about killing men and youkai...
susie (Chapter 2) - Sun 13 Feb 2022
F.Y.I... I loved their banter lol.
I always wondered about his clothes. i like this explaination.
Kathy (Chapter 7) - Sat 12 Feb 2022
It is very beautiful
Aede (Chapter 7) - Sat 12 Feb 2022
I really like this story. The open end just added to it's charm. The characters were them but matured and yet different but the same. As I matured myself I started to see some of the immaturity and toxicity of Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship and started to think that she deserved to be more than a shadow of a woman died. Sesshoumaru was one that changed most as a person and yet remained dignified, learned from his mistakes. I don't think that Rin was the right choice for him because of the hero worship and the father figure role that he played, the author's decision was just a obvious choice.
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