So goood I know this chapter was posted roughly two months ago but I adore this story and can't wait to see the victory and choices made! I hope to see the next chapter before christmas to be able to enjoy it then. Thank you for keeping up all the hard work on this story!
Ahhh!! I like when Sesshomaru learns about his past mistakes and he tries to fix those mistakes. And I love it when he and Inuyasha spend time together.
Crispywheat09 (Chapter 5) - Tue 20 Aug 2024
Awesome chapter. How things took twists! I wonder what the valley will do mow!
REDWOLF (Chapter 5) - Tue 20 Aug 2024
That was...WOW..fantastic!!
Yasmine (Chapter 5) - Tue 20 Aug 2024
Amazing chapter, well worth the wait! You're always making me anxious to read the next one. <3
They are starting to have romantic feelings for each other. Although, Kagome may know about her feelings for Sesshomaru. Wow! For a moment I thought she wouldn't survive. But I'm glad that Kagone is still alive.
Gimmemore75 (Chapter 4) - Wed 05 Jun 2024
This is such cool story! I wonder who's out to get Kagome? Where was Kiseki? Fuiasu playing matchmaker for Sesshomaru and Kagome was just wonderful! I also love how their relationship is progressing! Also you give us such long chapters, I feel like I'm 12 chapters into a fanfc instead of four. You feed us wel.
I am on the LITERAL edge of my seat! Holy moly this story is so addicting. The long chapters made me feel like I've read at least 15 chapters and I loved every bit of it. I appreciate the time you take to write this truly. It's been a pleasure.
i can't wait for the next chapter :)
Year long wait is so worth it.
Year long wait is so worth it.
Year long wait is so worth it.
Yasmine (Chapter 4) - Sun 26 May 2024
I loved this chapter, I didn't want it to end! Can't wait for the next one and for sesshoumaru to get even more jealous !
Rayen (Chapter 4) - Sat 25 May 2024
Just found your story. Loving how you are taking the time to build up Kagome, Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's characters and how you are building up their relationships. It feels so natural and smooth. Amazing, amazing charoter. I love how you resolved Kagome and Sesshomaru's conflict. I can't wait to find out who the assasin is, and see Kagome develop into a warrior.
Oh boy! This is getting better. I love it when Inuyasha acts as an adult but also I love when he acts like... Inuyasha. Poor Shippo, I understand him but he has to know how strong is Kagome. And Kagome wins, yeiiii.
Kamari sounds like a sweetheart but she also had a low key over inflated ego. How could she not have guessed that a miko wouldnt be bothered by her power? Come on girl. I will say the realest thing she did though, was not agree straight away to friendship. Go head and heal boo, we understand.
Overall, I'm happy to see the progression in everyone and the story. Though, I find Shippou's overly rude behavior in the last few chapters a bit out of character/odd. I get he's worried but maybe I'm just not used to him being so mouthy. Oh well, beautiful story. I'm looking forward to more!
Kamari sounds like a sweetheart but she also had a low key over inflated ego. How could she not have guessed that a miko wouldnt be bothered by her power? Come on girl. I will say the realest thing she did though, was not agree straight away to friendship. Go head and heal boo, we understand.
Overall, I'm happy to see the progression in everyone and the story. Though, I find Shippou's overly rude behavior in the last few chapters a bit out of character/odd. I get he's worried but maybe I'm just not used to him being so mouthy. Oh well, beautiful story. I'm looking forward to more!
Amai (Chapter 3) - Sat 25 Nov 2023
Incredible plot furthering and character development pace. The details are just right. I am adding this fic to my favorites for sure. Please update soon. I cant wait for Kagome to realize her potential and display it for the courtiers. Sesshoumaru doesnt acknowledge it but hes been a goner since the first fight where she bled for him and he felt guilty for it.
What does shippo know now which we dont ?!? Aaah
Amai (Chapter 2) - Sat 25 Nov 2023
Wow. Where have you been ?!
This is well written and definetly thrilling. Cant wait to read more.
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