Such a lovely update. All the descriptions of the breads and sweets are yummy. I love how excited she is about all the choices. I was hoping that he had saved her a piece. I can hardly wait to read more of this story.
Hi there!
I recently came back to reading fanfics after probably more than a decade, and fiiiinally joined Dokuga. This was the first fic that I decided to read, and it's off to a delicious start. c: Sesshoumaru as a baker is just...oooh. A nice image.
I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes, and in the meantime, I'm going to check out your other stuff!
Mecca (Chapter 4) - Sat 12 Jun 2021
This is delightful! Can't wait to see how it all unfolds! I'd like to give a prompt! "insatiable" <3
Ooh! The plot thickens. I wonder what will happen now? Will he continue to be friendly or will he try to push her away from his bakery?
I'm enjoying this story so much! Sesshomaru the baker is a win for me any day. Poor Kagome though, even I would struggle with the choices if he explained it that way.
Prompts: Yellow and Milk (2 separate words you can use however you want)
Again, like I said before, love love love your description of the scene. I can picture myself in the bakery! What will Kagome choose? I'd go with cake myself but that's cause I have a sweet tooth.
Very interesting story premise. I can't wait to see where you take this. I'm loving your description of the setting by the way: the way you set up the intro to the story in this chapter was well done.
It is a nice story. Can't wait for more. Plus, Fuafua-sama's POV every forth chapter os GREAT!
Absolutely! It's nice to get his POV too. Ahhh...an only for youkai place. The plot thickens.
Neelixonee (Chapter 4) - Sat 05 Jun 2021
I love when writers give out of the ordinary jobs to Sesshoumaru!
I can't wait to read the development.
Prompt: wheedle
Squee! Two chapters in one night! My fluff bunny is very happy!
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