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Jheni Kuchiki (Chapter 21) - Wed 26 Jul 2017

Really? I don't understand. Did she go to the well at the end? Because this seems to be an infinity loop. Yours history was great. but I'm confused. Ow


rachel (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Feb 2017

Please get a beta for this story. It i promising but the grammatical mistakes are unbearable.


gingiyume (Chapter 18) - Sat 25 Apr 2015

I would implore that you learn the finer nuances of emotions. And spacing. I found the story erratic, and I gave it many chances, but I find I truly cannot bring myself to finish it. The characters' reactions were borderline inexplicable and the way the plot progressed downright preposterous.

I do not intend to be mean, but failure to learn would truly be detrimental to your future writing. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 21) - Mon 06 May 2013

This story was great and I enjoyed it!


Alicia (Chapter 21) - Sat 21 Jul 2012

This was a really good story and I couldn't stop reading it :)

However the mentioning of greek gods throughout the story kind of annoyed me, oh well, I loved it anyway.


KEdakumi (Chapter 21) - Sat 09 Jun 2012

Such a great story, Jen.  I love how you give such wonderful twists and turns and don't over-do it in the angst dept, keeping everything balanced out.

 


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 21) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

I really like your story. Now to what I have to say about it, I really hate it to. It was good, really it was. There was a little to much angst. Really, though. It was an amazing story and I will probably read it again. It needs some grammar checking though. Most of them are little things like repeats or you just misspelled or used the wrong word. Still great job.


missy (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Dec 2010

this is a very good, wonderful, great story, and i love and like this story since i first started reading it your a very good, wonderful great author who wrote this wonderful, good, great story.


Rocks (Chapter 21) - Wed 28 Jul 2010

This is like the coolest and weirdest story ever. I kept wondering how you were going to get the story to come around to that of what the original anime was. The only flaw I saw was the word trashed like a trash can is should be thrashed the 'h' was missing out of every single one of them. Other wise I loved the story it was so different and kept you guessing what would happen to the characters. I bet you could have taken this further with the sister momo and on into the future but is was still a good ending. Thanks for the great read


Jillandria (Chapter 21) - Tue 29 Jun 2010

Muy Bueno! lo que es una hermosa historia. Un escritor de talento que está (Mi Spanish es terrible).

Very good! What a beautiful story. A gifted writer you are. (my spanish is terrilbe)


Hesunohana (Chapter 9) - Sat 27 Mar 2010

I'm only on the 9th chapter of your fiction, but still, I wanted to leave a review.

 

well, strange is my first comment. the atmosphere, how you write, strange. but there is also ggood cliffhanger. we all know Midoriko is gonna die, but what will become of Kagome ? and Sesshoumaru ?

 

so I'm gonna continue reading because I like your fiction ! (smile)


Revas (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Mar 2010

I looove it! Can't wait until I can finish reading it


Athenesic (Chapter 2) - Tue 23 Mar 2010

I love it! Great story. :)


Lexie (Chapter 21) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

naaaw :)  but sad. please update!!


Darcy (Chapter 21) - Tue 09 Mar 2010

That was a very good chapter..loved the ending!


Lexie (Chapter 20) - Fri 22 Jan 2010

wow.

PLEASE UPDATE!!


Megan (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

I LOVE IT!!!

there are, however, a few mistakes in subject-verb agreement but there are so few of them for a secondary language!!! I'm really impressed!! *smiles brightly and happily* 

Keep writing, I wanna see where this goes!!

Bye!! =}}


Lexie (Chapter 19) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

ok wierd, odd but so damn addicting.

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!


mary (Chapter 18) - Fri 15 Jan 2010

i'm sorry, all the twists are confusing and frustrating me to no end. i mean i know the title is "when the past is the future," but i keep wondering if that is the case, wouldn't it result in a repeat of events? what'll happen now? or won't it? like a new reality of some sort? i dunno. i guess we'll see. 


Lexie (Chapter 17) - Tue 12 Jan 2010

awww, poor Kagome! when will she awake? will she and sesshoumaru make up?

UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

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PLEASE?!!

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