It was a real nice one after so long.. I haven't been able to come back to this fandom for a while. Recently I decided I would start reading again to fuel the fire and finish my incomplete works here..

Though there were things that disrupted my flow of reading like very rookie grammatical mistakes. I'm sry I'm a bit like that. On one hand the vocabulary used was awesome and above average that cannot be said for many. But on the other hand mistakes like wrong uses of 'to' and 'too' ; 'your' and 'you're' ; 'bear' and 'bare', which I see more frequently than should, ticked me off slightly..

Also the flow in the beginning was really great, but I felt like around the end it became very rushed. Especially from the point of Sesshoumaru's confession. Also some scenes felt a little unoriginal since I've already read like a dozen similar scenes. Like the conversation about heir and lifespan, (that happened a little bit rushed during the confession), and such.

I love it that the trauma of battle was mentioned near the end. All in all it was really great. A lil bit more could've been done and the characters could have been brought out more beautifully but I really appreciate it.. Thank you for sharing.. 

What an awesome anf well-written one shot. Thank you for sharing!