kaoruhana (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Apr 2021

Don't know how you haven't got more reviews.  I liked your writing style and the premise of the story.  I also liked the way you connected the Shikon to actual world events, though I am grateful what you wrote is fiction.  Hopefully, Rin won't be alone for too long?  Poor girl, I really feel for her.  

 

 

 


SmilingFool (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Apr 2021

Wow that was just wow...  I'm lost for words however, this was a great piece of work.  Loved it such a twist to the norm that it actually fit as if it were real....  Way to go loved it.  At least Rin survived. 


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