Don't know how you haven't got more reviews. I liked your writing style and the premise of the story. I also liked the way you connected the Shikon to actual world events, though I am grateful what you wrote is fiction. Hopefully, Rin won't be alone for too long? Poor girl, I really feel for her.
Wow that was just wow... I'm lost for words however, this was a great piece of work. Loved it such a twist to the norm that it actually fit as if it were real.... Way to go loved it. At least Rin survived.
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