Wow poor Kagome I was thinking they'd do more than scold and bring up her short comings Hazings never been fond of them and never got envolved Kagome and the others should have the same thinking but then again Kagome's always nieve or just being a teen. anyways the boys forgot why they were at the mall can't wait to see what happens with that wonder what Sango and Kagome have to do to get the mall cops from arresting the boys.. Wonder what Sesshomaru will do? Will he ask for them to use the shrine or find something on his own. Wonder how he feels about Bankotsu checking out Kagome there are some protective instincts there. Can't wait to see what happens hopefully Kagome puts her foot down on the hazing hate to see what Kikyo will do to her.
I like what I've read of this story so far, enough that when you do update, I'll be clicking on the chapter to read it. I really like all of the interactions between the characters so far, specifically, the way you've characterized their relationships and shown the closeness between Inuyasha and Kagome, and so on.
A part of me wishes that some of that closeness was elaborated on. How did Kagome and Inuyasha's friendship grow? What was Kagome's first meeting with Sesshomaru like? Etc. Etc.
Anyway, good work, I'll keep an eye out for an update!
Cute Kid Kagome! I love this! I can't wait to see what else this story has in store!
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