I need more or how there is more.

Absolutely great story I really enjoyed reading it 

Not much of a plot, but it was fairly a nice read.

^_^ <3<3<3

Me gustó mucho describes muy bien las luchas creo que esta historia la lei antes pero no me imporó leerla otra vez

Loved reading your work- really fun story

I'm intrigued by this plot so far! It's interesting to see events over many years as opposed to the usual time frames that we see in fics.

The Kouga stuff doesn't really bother me because I know it's not permanent or serious, but I'm waiting to see Sesshoumaru show some jealousy. I know it's probably going to be a while based on how the two have interacted so far, but the build up seems worth it. There's also the fact that reading something like this now as an adult elicits different responses from me than I think it would have when I read a lot of fanfiction as a teen. As a kid, the fling with Kouga would have been unacceptable to me in a Sess/Kag fic, hahaha.

Kagome's monologues are a bit much. I think they would work better as predominantly narration/her observations with a little less being said aloud. It's just a little fatiguing to read, I think. I understand how you've characterized her in this particular fic, though. 

Rin's behavior kind of stood out to me in this chapter. It's been 20 years since they they arrived, making her 38 now, but she's still really childish. I dunno if that was intentional or something that was missed as part of the edits you did (like I don't know if you adjusted years or anything when you edited). Not a big deal--just something I noted when she was present.

I laughed out loud at Kagome entering Sesshoumaru's study with a, "Hey, sup?" 

I could picture his face so clearly. 

Finally I'm done reading this. Boy, it was such a journey indeed. Not gonna lie but I skipped Kagome-Kouga smutty scenes xD I like this story, tho I still have a question on my mind. So those two baddies were truly behind everything? I'm still confused on that part xD but all in all, I enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing them, Author-san! 

I'm on the first chapter and it's interesting so far. I always love ot when Kagome isn't a damsel-in-distress type so really thanks for that! I can't wait to read them all!

The story and plot seems very interesting but the way it's written I don't know the tense is off a bit. It's like one part is being written in past tense then present tense. That can happen. Maybe a beta should review it a bit. Anyway It's a little weird to read so after the weird sticks out tongue part I don't think I can manage. Really a great plot though

Good story 

 Hi , I love this fanfiction ...great story ....exceptional plot...best i have read in sometime. i hope you will write more sess /kag fanfictions . I only read sess/ kag stories...I never did believe Inuyasha deserved Kagome after the way he use to treat her especially with the whole Kikyo situation , he aways treated her second to kikyo. I always thought Kagome was a much better person and excepted Inuyasha as he was  and  Kagome was purer miko than Kikyo ever was .I never thought she looked like kikyo very much at all. I actually thought she looked much more like Midoriko than Kikyo. I think she was much more powerful than Kikyo to she was just untrained. But if you think about it Kagome's soul was 500 years older than Kikyo's soul so she should have been more powerful and also Kagome was born with the jewel inside of her she carried it in her body for 15 years her whole life before she fell into the well ,  Remember Kaguya kidnapped Kagome because '' Kagome was immune to time ''  which was how Kaguya put it. That is why Kaguya wanted to kill Kagome she wanted Kagome's ammunity to time...  Kaguya was that demon woman from  ''The castle beyond the looking glass '' movie. I assume you have seen it. Any way I will be looking forward to reading anymore sess/kag fanfiction stories you write or have written going to see if you have anymore  sess/kag to read now..............................................................................chat with ya later ...............TDAN

I loved this story. So glad I didn't have to wait to see what happened. It was well written and very entertaining. Thank you for sharing it. 

Love the story! I like how Badass Kagome was!

Thank you guys for all the reviews, it means a lot! Really happy that folks are enjoying the story. it's a full novels length, and that you guys are enjoying it so much that you're powering through it so quickly gives me the warm fuzzies : D

Wow that was an amazing story loved it.  Took me day and night to finish it.  I wanted to thank you for writing it.  An entire story in less than a week really I don't think I've read any author doing something like that before.   Well done.  I look forward to reading more stories from you.  Thank you again.

This was enjoyable from start to finish. Great format and idea!  

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That was an absolutely AMAZING story. I literally just spent the entire night reading this. WHO CARES ABOUT HOMEWORK WHEN THERE'S SMEXY KOUGA AND SESSY?!?! 

This is one of my most favorite stories of all time. I don't even know where to begin because I loved ALL of it. Just holy shit. 

AMAZING JOB

Amazing writing! Such a great story! Definitely one of my favorites :)

I loved this! It was so awesome! That fight scene near the end was great too, those are so hard to do well and you accomplished it! Great work!