Amazing idea! Omg I would have loved to read the longer version of this! 

This was fantastic!! So creative! this would be an amazing story the concept is super original ????

That was something totally off the wall, what a great storyline can't wait to see what you do with this.  Update soon.

That is a great example of leave well enough alone. But my fav part was their greeting:

"Sesshomaru.”

“Gesundheit.

Oh my gawd that was hilarious.