Oh man I love this too! I don't suppose we'll get an update though seeing as to how this was updated 10 years ago *tears* ah well. Gonna go drink my problems away... just kidding, I'm a new mom, can't very well do that eheh xD
TKE (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Aug 2010
Luv the story....can't wait for an update!!!
I really enjoyed reading this story.... I do hope you plan to update soon....
This is a very interesting story. As far as losing Word. You can download a free program that is a lot like Word. Google 'OpenOffice'.
i really love this story... :)
seems we make little progress in finding sesshous body but that about the right pace!
this chapter was great...seems sesshoumaru does not like kouga kissing kagome :D
hope to read more soon
LC Rose (Chapter 7) - Tue 10 Feb 2009
| Oh boy, you updated and what an update it was!!! I loved the interaction between Kagome and Kouga. I've always had a soft spot for the stupid wolf. Anyhoo, wonderful chapter. Each time you raise more and more questions in my mind. I love how this story is going.
LC
MontiK (Chapter 7) - Tue 10 Feb 2009
I love this, can't wait to see more. I love how you've done Sesshoumaru's past and intergrated the feudal era with the paranormal detectives in the future. It's all great, please update soon! Im on the edge of my chair!
MontiK
Yay! Fast updates are always fabulous!
I like the way you did Koga in this chapter. He's very in character. Now I'm wondering, how did Sesshoumaru get the jewel? Why would he need it???
Anyway, I'm glad the dialogue thing hepled. It worked very well for me :)
Arc-an Angel (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Feb 2009
| Lovely so far. I'm interested to see what happens next.
Tajia (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Feb 2009
| I just read the story up to now and I like it a lot. I love your timeline of events, Kagome did not travel back instead it was Rin who was the next reincarnation. I look forward to finding out more, like what Inuyasha has been doing all this time, and what role the others members of the group will play in your story. Thanks a lot!
Okay, this is now officially one of my very favorite stories. I'm so sad that I've come to the end for now, please update soon!
Oh, that chapter gave me chills! Excellent!
Yes, this is turning out to be an amazing story. This chapter is the best yet. Nice writing!
Oh, yeah! Awesome!
How interesting!
Very interesting! Humm I think the yen is down to about 90jpy per $1.00 so $10,000.00 would be 900,000jpy :) just in case you're interested.
Hello! I was wondering when you'd update this. I missed it terribly so, and I'll admit, I usually dislike AU, but this is a nice AU that deserves a nice read :)
As far as dialogue is concerned, my creative writing professor (Jack Riggs, a brilliant author) told us that it's best to get the "tag" out of the way so the dialogue can get out of the way as well... kind of like this:
"Well," he wrung his hands, "I'm not so sure how that's going to work out".
He always did this. Always doubted himself, and never made up his mind. Her jaw clenched.
"That's too bad, Bobby" fell from her lips, and she stormed off before he could make excuses.
This can make play-by-play dialogue less awkward. The phrase "he wrung his hands" is the tag, and by showing that he is nervous by having him wring his hands, Bobby can be described without using the word nervious. It breaks up all the "he said" then "she got mad and said" stuff. Also, adding what the characters are doing in between words, even if it's a narrowing of eyes, can be used to create less of a scripted feeling. I hated dialogue before I was taught this lesson that has SAVED my life in writing.
LC Rose (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Feb 2009
| YEAH! You delivered ANOTHER wonderful chapter!! I absolutely loved the confrontation between the two brothers over Rin and her last words. It's a funny thing and I've seen it with my own chapters. There'l be one I put out that I'm not entirely pleased with and I'll received nothing but praise for (which is what you're getting here). Funny how that is. :-) Anyhoo, well done. Well done. Thank you so much for continuing with this. Please, keep it up and give me more.
LC Rose (Chapter 5) - Fri 23 Jan 2009
| I love how you made Rin the new Kikyou. And how you showed her being introduced to the story, as it is. She would use the jewel as a fishing lure! :-) A very nice update.
Cindy (Chapter 4) - Wed 31 Dec 2008
Interesting concept, sort of the movie "Ghost" meets the cast of Inuyasha.
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