IM NOT CRYING AKSKDKKDKDNDKDJDKDJSNABSNJDKS this was so good I loved every moment of this. I read it while I was supposed to be working and it's just so wonderful. And if not for how young baby hanyou Shinkai is I would've thought that Kagome was pregnant before dying and reviving. This was amazing and I love your work so much for this!
Wow! Just wow. That was amazing. You're an excellent writer, I loved your imagery and symbolism. There were so many ups and downs, and sometimes I was so mad reading, but everything was worth it lol. And the way you write the characters! Omg, everything felt so real and accurate. Kagome's personality and growth were perfect, and your Inuyasha was spot on! The way you had Sessh growing and changing was beautifully written. I can't wait to read more of your work. Thank you for such an epic story!
Lauren (Chapter 25) - Sat 12 Mar 2022
I can't believe I haven't left a review on this story. It was amazingly written, very heartfelt, and wrought with emotion. I love how complex and conflicted your original characters were. How they were unable to move forward, to heal, and how much they had in common with the Inu-tachi's inability to figure out how to live in peace. It was sweet of you to give Shinkai a new beginning. And your ending was perfect. All the lose ends were tied nicely and we got a glimpse of the future.
I just loved this story. It was wonderful.
Omg nd I do mean OMG i read from start to finish .. when I tell you I was consumed by this story I got mad when I have to go to sleep to stop reading it you did an amazing job I look forward to reading more of your work I'm extremely sad it's over I just want to read more
Nicole (Chapter 25) - Thu 03 Jun 2021
This story was very good. I'll admit, you almost lost me as a reader in the very beginning after what happened to Miroku - specifically HOW - but after a few weeks of pouting and denial I came back to finish the story. It was way more heartbreaking than I had inticipated. I felt for so many of your original characters and their plights. I do think the ending felt a bit rushed... or maybe tbe beginning was slow? I'm unsure of which, but the pace seemed to have tripled near the end. That last chapter seemed to wrap up everything so nicely and leave me wanting for more at the same time. Excellent, excellent read.
Lee (Chapter 25) - Fri 14 May 2021
Thanks so much for sharing! I've enjoyed it greatly. Lots of tears!
So, I finally got around to reading this after having an afternoon to myself. I like the premise of the story so far and can't wait to read and see where it goes. I'm not a big fan of the scene at the end (though I understand why it needed to be in the story), but that's just my personal preference. (I say this because I'm in a fluffly story mood today).
I look forward to reading the rest! Because any story that has me clicking next chapter is not only well written but has obviously hooked me enough to keep reading.
SmilingFool (Chapter 25) - Thu 06 May 2021
Wow what a story that was..... Loved it man I think I'm going to read it again... LOL that was a lot to take in at least eveyones happy... Woo hoo..
Jade (Chapter 22) - Tue 13 Apr 2021
I'm dying laughing at "laceration?"
That was such a packed update! So much happened! Great work!
Jade (Chapter 11) - Fri 09 Apr 2021
Chap 5&9 have the chap posted twice in the same entry. Chap 11 has nothing, I switched over to the other location you have this posted to finish reading what you've got and this is amazing! The history included, your OCs are interesting and the story just flows. The only thing that's been difficult has been the time jumps in earlier chapters. Great work! I'm so excited for the last few chapters!
Chapter 21 seems to be missing '^_^
kitsune (Chapter 13) - Fri 26 Mar 2021
Hey! I'm really enjoying the story so far. But chapter 11 seems to be missing?
poor Inu
I enjoyed the story in this chapter a lot - but must admit I skipped reading the lyrics from the song
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