Oh that was good really I enjoyed reading this had both of them learning something new and raw. Update soon.
Lovely chapter. Just the right touch of steamy. I wonder if Sesshomaru will seek out his mother. Of course, that could cause a whole other line of trouble.
Mary (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Mar 2021
I really like it!!
I'm loving this take on the story. I believe she is going to need that cold shower soon. LOL
I really like the divergent beginning from the original storyline. Looking forward to seeing how this goes forward. ????
No cold river Kagome. Only a hot spring. Heh heh! And Sesshomaru perhaps? I think, maybe, yes?
I'm in love already just by the first chapter. I can't wait to read more and see whare this goes....
Nallely (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Mar 2021
Ok, let me say, what a great start. Very well written and the twist it's nice. I will be reading the next chapters so please keep going.
Jenny (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Mar 2021
Amazing start! I'm excited to see where this goes :)
I think this is going to be a great story! And I love that Sess has both arms ! Big smiles! I'll be watching for your updates.
I love the start of this story. It's interesting, sweet, and makes me want to read more. Please update regularly!! <3
Morgan (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Mar 2021
Great beginning! Can't wait for more ♥?
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