Reviews for Wilful Desolation by Alon

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Goldie Fawn (Chapter 14) - Thu 01 Apr 2021

No one? NO ONE?! Why is he hiding him from her. 

Redleopord (Chapter 14) - Thu 01 Apr 2021

Hate to be Jaken when she remembers. He better hope Sesshomaru dont decide to kill him slow. Great update!

SmilingFool (Chapter 14) - Thu 01 Apr 2021

When will she remember and especially who killed her.  Wait until Sesshomaru finds out.  There's going to be hell to pay for that one.

Redleopord (Chapter 12) - Mon 22 Mar 2021

Never new Jaken had it in him. Wow. Dead imp walking. Sess is gonna be beyond pissed.

SmilingFool (Chapter 12) - Mon 22 Mar 2021

Wow already he's at it, poor Kagome hopefully she'll become wise....  like that would happen.  lol  Can't wait to read more.....

Fallingyuki (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

I can't believe he did that. Not something I expected. It is Jaken right?

Eryn (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Mar 2021


Reverent Moonlight (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

Oh, shit! My jaw literally dropped!

SHORTFRY (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

Omg I did not see that coming! Jaken! I love this story! it's got me so wrapped up from the get-go, you have a way with weaving suspense and thrill with words. Keep up the great work!

SmilingFool (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

Oh that was so good...... OOOO you are so EVIL, EVIL I'll tell you....  Wow that was a first, no second story that had Jakken kill Kagome one by poison this one ? not so sure...  update more please need to feed my brain more words.

Nilee1 (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

Wow, I didn't see that one coming!

Since Jaken is still alive, obviously Sesshoumaru doesn't know.

Goldie Fawn (Chapter 11) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

WHAAAAAAAT! I'm practically screaming here! 

Goldie Fawn (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Mar 2021

Wait, WHAT?! They're gone?!

SmilingFool (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 Mar 2021

Wow didn't expect that to come from her.  Oh well better than "What did you do?  Why did you bring me back?"  There could have been worse things I suppose.

Eryn (Chapter 8) - Thu 11 Mar 2021

Oh my.  How horrifyingly sad.  What an amount to go through.


Goldie Fawn (Chapter 8) - Thu 11 Mar 2021

Dark and bloody spooky premise: check

Dark and bloody spooky location: double check.


I'm really concerned with how day 7 will go. O_O

Fallingyuki (Chapter 8) - Wed 10 Mar 2021

Wow! Of all places to move into. I guess we have to wait another day. Not you I mean in the story. 

Fallingyuki (Chapter 7) - Wed 10 Mar 2021

I can't wait to see what happens tomorrow. 

SmilingFool (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Mar 2021

This story is coming along nicely....  I love it.  I wonder what Rin is thinking about Kagome and the why's to her having no reaction.  Love the story update soon.

Fallingyuki (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Mar 2021

Wow. I didn't think Sesshoumaru would show her to anyone till she came back. I wonder what Rin thinks.

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