Ah, I'm worries for Mizuki because of the jewel! I hope Kagome and Sesshomaru can go back into the past to protect her!
So this is a unique story, and I do like some parts of it such as Rin being reincarnated as Kagome's child. The first chapter was a little confusing to read because I couldn't who was speaking the dialogue, and it took me a little bit to figure that out since you jumped around, but never really explained who was speaking to whom. I also am wondering why you choose to avoid the word "said" in your writing?
Now off to read the rest.
Nice chapter.
Wow its been a while since you posted an update glad you did meanial tasks and dressing down can always be fun... lol loved it. Can't wait till they start training.
Great story.
That was a nice chapter well done update soon.
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