Wait... How did kagome get pregnant with sesshomaru child? Didn't she just give birth? Anyway, I like the dynamic they had going on. All of them are dysfunctional, and I like the fact that someone wrote a story on it. It's not weird for things like this to happen, if anything it's very mature.  Their dynamic was interesting, but still, how did Inuyasha take it, and sesshomaru, how did they even get to that point? I also love how you did the past and present thing, and can't wait to see how the girls react to each other or morah.

Oh dear.. To be honest I was waiting for something like this.. I know a lot of people haven't touched yashahime but I have been watching it and to be honest the only reason I watch it is because of Moroha. But that hadn't kept me from wishing that towa and setsuna were actually kagome's.. I like the beginning and I'm excited as to what shape this story is going to take... I'll be waiting for the updates.. And dear, don't rush yourself.. Do this at your own good pace and it will unfold beautifully.. Great job! I'll be on the lookout..