So sweet! I love this story! It was nice to see their relationship grow and they both seemed very in character still.

I really enjoyed this, this is most definitely something that I will come back to read. The imagery was just amazing, I found myself smiling a whole lot while reading this. Great job 

Welcome to fan fiction! I hope you'll love it here!! It's a great place to begin growing your strengths as a writer. This first chapter was lovely!! Well done, my friend!

Is it bad that I want moooooore!  You are so good!  Love this latest installment.  I know you said no more but my heart is still hoping. :)

Hola.

Después de tan hermoso capítulo, simplemente no puedes escribir que es el último!!!

Uno más por favor, eres genial!!!

I love this series!!! Would love a continuation bu only if you feel like writing :) 

Yay!!! This was pretty great! I love how sess is slowly warming up to kagome and how he got all lonely for a moment. Its good getting more comfortable expressing himself. I love it! Keep it up!

Wow, this literally took my breath away, i'm totaly In love with this...It's the perfect combination to the first chapter. It's short, sweet and romantic. It doesn't stray form their character, very well portrayed. I read one of the other comments by Serena530

I second my opinion that this could be made into a one shot series with each phase of the Moon. See where their budding feelings take them. 
Whatever you may decide to do, know that your are definitely an amazing writer. I would love to read more of your stories.  

That was such a sweet and romantic little story. Thank you so much for writing it and for sharing it with us. :)

This was so beautifu. Keep up the great work!!

That was still as good as the first chapter! Its especially wonderful knowing something more may happen to them in the future. Thank you!

Te quedo perfecto!!!

Gracias

No abandones, sigue lo haces muy bien!!!

Nice job, I enjoyed the read. Writing is a way to express yourself and not really worry about what others think. You did a great job and I can't wait for your next work.

Very cute

Poetic prose...Absolutely beautiful! I am thankful that you added this chapter. 

This was an unexpected surprise, but I very much enjoyed it.  It was sweet and romantic, and now I find myself wanting more.  Maybe if you feel like it you could continue it, maybe make it a oneshot series, and use the various phases of the Moon.  Continue their budding relationship in the past, and then send her home to the future when the jewel is completed, parting them for a time and letting them know how strong their bond is and how much they mean to each other.

Maybe have Kagome meet a present time Sesshomaru and they can continue their relationship, or she could meet him for the time she is in the future and send her back to the past to be with the younger version of him after a few months or years, and maybe show the present time Sesshomaru and present time Kagome after her younger self is back in the past.

Just an idea in case you do decide to keep Moon Talk going, but whatever you decide this was lovely and I hope you continue to write more stories for us readers to enjoy.

AMAZINGGG! I love this. Your story reminds me why I love the moon so much. You did an amazing job with this chapter. You are great at writing, it flows so smoothly and stays where you are directing it to go. Thank you so much! If you get the urge to add to this, please don't hesitate.

If a baby writer can write so beautifully and concisely as this I can't even imagine what an experienced writer could accomplish.  I've always been gifted at writing poetry and would more often than not struggle so much to write prose.  So I'm in awe at what I've read knowing that you're new at this. I've read bot your stories and absolutely love them!  Sesshomaru acts so normal as I young guy who's about to confess to a girl would think and act, while still coming off as himself. I love the part about him picking a flower randomly to give to her.  I love that he asks Sango for advice hours before she's supposed to be back (that is such a guy thing to do-wait till the last minute). Please continue this story it's really wonderful to read and very imaginative. 

Oh, my! This is so beautiful!

So poetic, romantic and perfect!

This was so beautifully poetic and romantic! I would absolutely love to read more! I look forward to reading more from you!