Ryo chan (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Jan 2021

Cute lol XD the cake being vile was hilarious 

Ryo chan (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Jan 2021

Cute lol ???? the cake being vile was hilarious 

SmilingFool (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 Jan 2021

The letters are okay but what is the plot of the story?  What will happen next... Update soon

Kida Garcia (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 Jan 2021

Thank was cute! Please add more! 

Redleopord (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 Jan 2021

I thought the story was cute. I liked the letter concept, especially for Sesshomaru. Because, well, he just doesn't say much does he? Great job on Kagome's first letter. The story was set up well. She spoke of her hurt and confusion and I liked the inclusion of Rin. It gave a little more of a real factor. I think you have Sesshomaru's character portrayed well. Apologizing is not his thing, but he does so twice showing personal growth. Very nice. At the end of his first letter though, I think the words "any longer" instead of "anymore" would sound a bit more like how he would phrase things. And instead of the word "scary", maybe the word "alarming".The more you write him, the easier it will get. And sometimes with him, less is more. Now the ending. Just a little quick. Sessh's short letter was fine, but I think there was opportunity to go beyond it. Show them together at the spring? Still writing, even though they're standing next to each other?What were his cruel words she eluded to in that P.S. ? Just a few thoughts. Overall, I really liked it. I want you to keep writing!  Don't worry if you don't get alot of reviews. Takes strength and courage to put yourself out there. Great job!!!

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