Reviews for Dangerous Game by Sage McMae

Faith (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Nov 2020

Great story! I love how she keeps letting him stew in his curiousity until he can't stand it anymore.

 

Just one small correction. Where you use the word perceptible, I think the word you intended is susceptible.

 

As a human Kagome is susceptible (vulnerable to) injury. Perceptible means "noticeable"


Tiffany (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Nov 2020

I love your stories, this one is no different. 

The only thing I would say to you is to watch your grammar tenses. You switch between present and past and from the way that you write, it seems like it should be in past tense.  

Other than that, keep up the good work.  

-Tiff 


Mecca (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Nov 2020

Another awesome oneshot, I loved that Sesshoumaru was absolutely clueless, and their little conversations building up to their final confessions. I always love seeing how they are doing in the future, complete with pups! Thank you for sharing :)


Mary J Dolph (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Nov 2020

Very cute, but short. Thank you for the light hearted story.


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