I think I'm gonna like Isao. Great story!! She is moving on kinda quick but cmon who can resist him! Lol! Please update soon!
Relationships that have trust at the fore are always the best. She couldn't trust Inuyasha this way, he'd proven time and time again that he would abuse any little amount. I'm rely enjoying this story. I love the way she's throwing everyone for a loop as we knew she would. The gift idea is very sweet and it makes sense. I fully understand not going with a conventional weapon and specifically why you chose to forgo a sword.
I can't wait for the next chapter
I have been pleasantly surprised with your story. It is a good read with good flow.
Well done.
Keep up the good work.
Hopeless Romantic
Awwwh thats a thoughtful gift. And i love getting to see his pov again! Tuank you for the updates! ???
Wow a great sense of ease these two have and I enjoy the fact they like teasing his mother along with the others... Oh this was a greast chapter..... update soon.
Great chapter! I love how closs the are getting they really seem to understand each other. I also like Sesshomaru's low key humor
Tisha (Chapter 26) - Wed 25 Nov 2020
Perfect. Well written it flowed wonderful to allow story to write itself just what i expected. Well done.
Hahaha. Sessh is gonna kickk his assss.
It was a awesome chapter you did wonderful. Im glad that it worked out well for you.
The important parts that you wanted to convey was there you did it lovely.
I personally would like to see her best him in the spar. She'll probably need the support she would garner in the future with the win.
I would say do what you feel comfortable with writing, you can do like a half scene where you start it out then gloss over it. But you are the writer its your choice.
Thanks for the update jt was a good chapter
Tisha (Chapter 25) - Tue 24 Nov 2020
Love this story. I think the fight scene should be up to you and your muse. The story is moving well and it is not good to become frustrated and lose interest. There are a lot of stories that are awsome on Dokuga and never reach completion.
Hey girl! Do your best and give us a fight scene!!
Firstly, I'm greatly enjoying this story. I pretty much binge read it when I first found it. Secondly, I think as such hype was placed on her fighting abilities which were generally glossed over as judo martial arts, This provides an opportunity to reveal to not only the characters but to the readers, what that really looks like. It's also an opportunity for you to broaden your writing scope. So give it a try and see how it goes. You may surprise yourself. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
OMG That was brilliant.... I loved it... So the general thought Kagome would back down.... LOL boy I 'd hate to be him..... Ouch purity burns would not feel to keen on yokai skin..... LOL Sesshomaru is just eating all this up ..... Yes let them battle....
2 chapters! yey! I love that Kagome is not being easily pushed around and that she is taking it in strides! I cant wait to see whats next for them!
Kagome 1
Satomi 0
This arc should be fun. Satomi is gonna love her, I just know it
Wow, well that was a kiss!
Yay I finally made it here, I actually started this story because I saw the art of the necklace, it's so pretty. Somehow it kept slipping under my radar and I'm so happy to have started reading
oh wow, I've been steadily reading through and I'm positively hooked. I really love how you take the known elements from the show/manga and then twist them just so with an explanation and I'm really here marvelling at all the nuance you've included. InuYasha's behaviours being from being spoilt and literally a human failing, more than a demonic upheaval.
And now Kags is a miko-hanyou which makes sense!
This is a fun story and I'm hooked. Ok, I'll continue reading now.
Oh! I also love that all the chapter names start with R, thats clever and my brain appreciates it lol
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