Whoo Hoo!!! Another chapter!!!! I am so grateful!!! Thank you so much!!! I love this fic!!! There aren't too many fics out there that has Rin in a serious light when she is still a child. She is usually just picking flowers as a airheaded kid or is a somewhat emotional teenager. I like this new Rin personality. Thanks for writing it.
Yea! Another chapter! I like how Kagom is disoriented and confused as soon as she "awakens" because it makes so much sense. She is, after all, still processing fighting and having her neck broken, while experiencing the pain, drama (not to mention death) that goes along with it. Then of course, having all of her friends crowd her and talking at the same time doesn't help. So you go Rin!!! Show what you can do!!! I love it!
The plot thickens! I liked your Rin. Don't worry about whether or not people will like your story. The beauty of fanfiction is that you are writing from love of the anime/manga only. Write what you love and you will never fail yourself. Write for others and you will start hating what should be a joyful exercise.
This sounds like the start of a really great story!!! I can't wait to read more! Usually I try to stop myself from reading every single update of my favorite stories because I like to read several chapters at once, but in this case I believe I will read every single update to this story as it comes along!!!! I can't wait to see what happens if/when Kagome wakes up. I wonder if she will have lost her memories? I know that that doesn't happen in the Inuyasha anime but.......well a little bit of drama adds to the spice of like lol!!!
A good start to a story! Always get the story out you want to tell. :) Wiccan and Vyncent could tell you stories of my mistakes with words. I *STILL* make them all the time. I think it took me two stories before I stopped saying "Sesshomaru was condensation." :P Another idea is to become someone's beta. I did it a few times before I ended up to crazy BUT it helped me greatly. It is easier to spot things in someone else's story than your own. YOU know what you mean - so your eyes glaze over things. I try to beta my own work now, but Wiccan always helps me and ALWAYS spots things I feel silly for not seeing.
Side Note - I loved your technical knowledge of the plants. I have some Japonica, myself. Keep writing - get the story out - I was gone for ten years and came back. Everyone knows people have lives and cannot update regularly as they would like to.
-Demonlordlover
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