Holy shit. Why haven't i read this sooner?? The angst, the feelings. Like, good god man walked away from a while life, she came in like a Molotov cocktail and just blew that shit up. He must have just been waiting for her and that must have been his wife on the phone when she walked in. He had no reservations the first time either, maybe he was also faking it til he made it.
Nice work! I like the way you portray emotions and the psychology of the characters. Looking ahead to your future works!
Very interesting one shot. I enjoyed it.
Mecca (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Oct 2020
This was some angsty goodness, I loved it! Kagome is of course the other woman... but damn it all, Sess probably wasn't in love with his ex...? At least in that way it's kinda justified lol Thank you for sharing!
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