No worries, the chapter was more than fine and still conveyed all the proper emotions. I really feel for Sesshomaru and am happy to see that others around him care. Can't wait to read the next chapter <3

I think you've done beautifully so far. Really looking forward to Kagome's introduction into storyline. He's finally reaching out for help so, soon, I think. Eagerly awaiting next chapter!

It sounded great, the way you decided to depict the scenes and introspection, waiting for next chapter eagerly ~ Bless! 

Yes! Rin is coming home! He's accepting help. Man the first chapter was such a gut punch, this chapter feels like when you rub the area while youre finally able to breathe again.

beautiful

If you wanted to make me cry, you should've just said so! This is so sad and so beautifu. I'm incredibly grateful that it'll get better from here because I don't think my heart can handle more misfortune for them.

My heart is dying. Poor Sesshoumaru. My heart hurts just reading this. Great emotional feels.

I love stories like this.  This was a great frist chapter.  I think you poetrayed Sesshomaru very well and your descriptiin of his feelings were/was well writen. 

I'm looking forward to reading more!  

P.S. Excuse any typos as I'm writing this on my phone.  

Wow that was tough, I enjoyed reading the chapter and hope to read more....  Update soon

Alrighty, you got me, I'm hooked xDDD I very much like the story so far!!! Tho I'm holding on your promise for fluffiness (??)

Omg I could cry. I think I will. This is such a gripping start. My heart...

Gracias!!!

Espero con ansia tu actualización!!!