That was a cool chapter at least the parents are happy about them being together sucks to be Inu Yasha.
Ooh first official outing as a couple
The dress is really pretty too! I love the idea of it in red
Oh inu papa you're so meddlesome. Inuyasha is gonna be there too isn't he lol
I'm so glad that you posted the reference dress bc my basic imagination did not do the dress justice. Can't wait to see If they bump into inu
Mecca (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Nov 2020
This was super fluffy, I definitely needed that in my life!! That artwork is fantastic! I'm so glad they made it official, and both were honest and didn't beat around the bush about wanting more. I'd say their staycation was super successful <3
Mecca (Chapter 3) - Sat 21 Nov 2020
I'm a sucker for a good lemon, and this is going pretty good... may I suggest one small little thing? Paragraph breaks so it's a bit easier to tell what's going on, all the elements are there though, the lemon is hot! Like fiyah!
This was such a sweet chapter! I wonder if Inuyasha is gonna be at dinner
That was a fun loving chapter.... Can't believe theu got caught.... LOL Leave it to Toga and Kimi to find them..... hahaha that was so much fun to read...
This is great. Can't wait until the next chapter!!!! Thanks
That was a great chapter.... At least now Kagome's worries are put to rest seeing how they both want each other for the long run.... woo hoo
yess, acting it out is definitely more fun than reading. If it'll make her feel better, she needs to initiate the conversation so she can stop worrying and focus on all the other good stuff....like that chest! and those thighs!
great chapter as always!
>u> We gonna get them acting it out in the next one?
also I have a feeling inu is gonna try and ruin shit for them
Eres genial y te quedo hermoso!!!!
Gracias!!!!
Now that was steamy! *Fans self*
Takeshi and Amaya had a pretty fun day but I'm glad they didn't take those personalities to bed with them, we don't need any doubts popping up.
This was a great chapter, can't wait to see what you have in store for these two
susie (Chapter 3) - Sun 04 Oct 2020
that was sweet and hot! kagome's so cute. it really pays to be ready for anything XD
That was a great chapter wonderfully done.... I'm glad they went on a date and had fun with others to end the night in each others arms... well done....
update soon.
susie (Chapter 2) - Fri 25 Sep 2020
i really liked sess's observation about her and inu's relationship being so chaotic and things couldn't go well when they were going well... if drama is all you thrive on, you won't be comfortable when the ships sailing steady, which is what you should be going for lol. otherwise, you're in for a world of trouble.
also, kagome's fun spontaneity is charming, and makes the contrast between them so glaring and fun. i wanna see how this date goes XD
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