I haven't seen that name pop up in Sess/Kag fanfiction in so long I literally nearly threw my phone I was so excited!
Fantastically written, feels very futuristic. I'm curious to see where the storyline goes. As always, very detailed and I appreciate the overwhelming almost blaringly bright setail. It puts me with the characters. Thank you!
Ah, geez, HAT!!! You haven't lost your touch, m'dear, srsly. Still able to pull one in and make one practically drool for MOAR!! Intriguing, engaging, mysterious, spell-binding... all the right descriptive terms all rolled into two chapters of one very interesting story. Can't wait to see what comes next. Oh, and btw, you're doing an excellent job with the characters. <3
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Im definitely hooked. I find your descriptions of sentinels and guides perfectly understandable within the story without it feeling like a dump of information. I have so many questions and i cannot wait for the next chapter. Great to have you back Hatter
This is awesome! The way it starts out - the unusual setting. i am invested. I look forward to the progression of this story.
I *really* love this story. I've never heard of Sentinals and Guides before, and it's a fascinating idea. I can't wait to read more.
Orotami (Chapter 2) - Mon 21 Sep 2020
This story is so incredibly good and amazing. I truly can't wait to read more!!
Kreve (Chapter 2) - Mon 21 Sep 2020
Loving this so far, can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.
That was a great chapter.... loved it...
I thought you were going off the tv series. I loved that show. The man, Detective Jim Ellison I remember how he came to be and how he began using his senses to help solve or fight crime. It was a wonder just like Manimal.... lol God's now watch someone write about that... It too would be something to look into...
Anyways to the question I had for the last chapter was not noted so I am asuming that yokai do not exist..... Which means humans with extraordinary powers.... way to cool can't wait to read more.... update soon.
Loving this story.
I love this already. More please!!!
That was such asn unique plot line of the story which I enjoyed reading. What it must be like to have your senses overwhelmed shaken to a point that you lose yourself. I feel for the sentinals, a question though. They are yokai? or just something else? This has me piqued and trying to come up with other ways of distraction is killing me to the point of I need to know... LOL Anyways I would like to read more of your story. Loved it update soon.
Amelia (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Sep 2020
Ahhhhh you're back! I need more!
susie (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Sep 2020
i reviewed on the other site, but i just want to say here how much i like how you've built the characters so far. I'm not familiar with this type of AU, but it is very compelling. I can't wait to see how those two react to one another. Thanks for writing!
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