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SmilingFool (Chapter 45) - Mon 08 Nov 2021

Oh loved the chapter so much drama happening with Naraku and his minions...  Kazi is one strange Kami, at least he's trying to help Kagome in his own weird way while Sesshomaru pouts about saving a human.  Go figure, Kagome riding a phonex...  You go girl...  LOL  Anyways, loved the chapter update.  Will be waiting for more.


Intel Pascua (Chapter 44) - Mon 20 Sep 2021

Hi! I have stumbled upon your story and I really liked how you've written the plot. You just keep me guessing on what happens next, and I'm practically hanging on to every clue there is of what fate has in store for them! And I am curious to see how they will overcome their own misgivings and prejudice. Can't wait for Sesskag to finally get closer and closer! Looking forward to the next update! Keep it going!

 

PS. Can you give me a clue on how many chapters this story might be, in your estimation? ???? Thank you! Stay safe! 


SmilingFool (Chapter 44) - Sat 18 Sep 2021

Wow that was some chapter the birds of paradise aka harpies are nasty pecker clawing birds wanting to eat Kagome because she carries the jewel...  Boy wonder if Koga knows about the library in the caves?  Hm wonder how Kagome is going to get out of this mess.  And where in the world is Sesshomaru?


SmilingFool (Chapter 43) - Wed 25 Aug 2021

That was a great chapter loved it....  


SmilingFool (Chapter 42) - Sat 24 Jul 2021

wow great chapter loved it...  Enter Koga woo hoo... Let the sparks fly...


SmilingFool (Chapter 40) - Sun 20 Jun 2021

Damn that was cruelty if I even read it...  No love or friendship there...  Nope now Naraku will know Kagome's whereabouts.... ouch


SmilingFool (Chapter 39) - Mon 17 May 2021

Wonder why Midoriku keeps reminding Kagome not to trust him.  So many things could be said however, I like the thought of Sesshomaru helping Kagome learn the sword and other things.  Great chapter.


Anonymous (Chapter 18) - Thu 29 Apr 2021
I thought you said in the last chapter that he made her FIRST rank attendant because they spent the night together. But this chapter starts out by saying she's back to second rank?

SmilingFool (Chapter 38) - Sat 24 Apr 2021

Oh damn I was hoping there was still time to save the Higurashi parents its so sad...  Hopefully someone will get the word out to Inu Yasha or Kikyo there is no way Kagome would take Kenta unless she was being an idiot thinking he was her savior...  At least she is learning to protect herself now so maybe one day she can stand up against the culprits.....  So sad.


SmilingFool (Chapter 37) - Wed 14 Apr 2021

Oh man poor Kagome its always one thing or another trust is a big issue if I ever saw one.  Between Midoriku and Kaze whispering or telling her the other is bad a influance on top of that having Sesshomaru on her back will either make her or break her.  Hopefully she'll learn what she needs to survive.


SmilingFool (Chapter 35) - Sat 06 Mar 2021

That was awesome....   Loved it Kaze is one thunderous God...  lol pun intended..  I enjoyed the look of horror upon Kagome's face...  Update soon.


SmilingFool (Chapter 34) - Tue 16 Feb 2021

i didn't care for this chapter, much too far back before Kagome's time but still a good chapter.


SmilingFool (Chapter 33) - Tue 02 Feb 2021

Oh damn poor Kagome always getting caught in situations she cannot control just yet....  Hopefully someone will train her.  So the dragons were lording over the west before the dogs took over...  Wonder what Sesshomaru will think about that.  OMG Izayoi actually appeared to help Kagome does this mean that she cannnot be saved by Tensaiga if she should perish a second time?  Update soon.


SmilingFool (Chapter 32) - Tue 26 Jan 2021

Ah man just when you think he's being nice he does a 360 showing how much of an ass he is....  LoL can't be mad at someone for not knowing about their anatomy how is she to learn if he doesn't teach her...  lol   I like Kaze he's straight forward and love's to pick on Sesshomaru.


kurapika_stan (Chapter 31) - Mon 11 Jan 2021

Wow! Another amazing chapter!! I haven't even realized I got to chapter 31 so quickly. I enjoy the way you manage to really bring the story together theoug the flashback scenes and having the Gods talk to their reincarnations. I wonder if Yama will ever discover the truth and if this new development will affect the new Sesshomaru and Kagome friendship/allyship. Once again, great story and keep up the great work.


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 30) - Wed 06 Jan 2021

Holy Cow! Hooked. I did t even realize I made it to chapter 30 so quickly ! I suspected that Kaze had not so pure intentions but the jealousy of a woman who has been reincarnated abandoned multiple times sounds  straight ludicrous! He needs to let her go lol butfor the purpose of this story omg what will Kagome do with this information. What will Yama do if/when she is no longer "asleep". I'm eager to find out. Thank you for an incredible read! Happy New Year!


kanie (Chapter 30) - Mon 04 Jan 2021

Man your story is really good. If my writing skills were as good as yours, I would be so happy. My English and grammar not good so I can't go into lots of detail like yours. anyway, midoriko I think is misinformed about Kazu. I mean someone who is going out of his way for his lover can't just betray her. Theirs a third party behind this misconception, plus I can't see Yama betraying her lover either to sleep with a human and get pregnant. That attack she dreamt while running seems like Inuyasha. But great update, can't wait to read more.

 

 


Esso Bluebear (Chapter 28) - Wed 23 Dec 2020

seriously.... girlfriend ur writing skills, thought process on this story is absolutely brilliant!!!! each moment just takes my breath away. i cannot wait for next update please.


Esso Bluebear (Chapter 22) - Wed 23 Dec 2020

Fucking A Brittany!!! My heart is cyring.... these love stories across time always seems to be the saddest. "clutching the missing string"... seriously dude.... ughhh my gods, its like how can one be in love with the moon when you cannot even reach it. 

So glad that i waited until there are more chapters to read. well done girlfriend. i love it!!! thank you and merry christmas!!!


SmilingFool (Chapter 27) - Wed 16 Dec 2020

Wow great chapter they are coming up with clues but not putting them together yet.....  I have a feeling things will be tense in the coming chapters which is a good sign.....   lol  update soon


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