Ah this last snippet had me wanting for morea!! Perhaps you're feeling generous?? Lol thanks either way!!

This is a neat start, too. I am really enjoying your writing and hope you are feeling better

Ooh! I'm very curious about the Out of Touch part.

Favorite line:

She will survive. It is what she does.

"... crackled with rage, but the glow on the end of that delicate digit popped and snapped against his aura as if itching to strike out at him."

I felt that! Like I had pop rocks in my mouth. The pace of this sentence really drove that imagery. Loved it!

Yay for strong Kagome!

Very intense start. I love his stoic panic.