Oye vey. Kagome would essentially information overload the room and then pass out for days before finishing the tale LOL. She's going to wake up to quiet the party going on around her.

Wow, I really love how it turns out. I love the detail that you put into the story like the chattering lord and such. I think it is the right amount of detail for me to be happily reading about and not just skip it throug. no offense. I really like your story so far. I'm curious how the youkai are going to handle kagome ????

Wow I think that went well....  LOL  Wonder who has Kagome now that she blacked out?  Sesshomaru was right to notice Kagome when others just disregarded her believing what they will oh well now they know better.... Hopefully Kagome's changes will give her a inu form instead of any other it helps with caring for the inu pup or any that she has...  Wonder who will be fighting to become her mate...  LOL   Update soon can't wait to read more I'm so hooked.

Another wonderful chapter thank you....  I wonder what Sesshomaru will say when he see's her...  What will they do when the find that they have the shikon no tama miko in their midsts and none the wiser except the wolves and the inu pup.  Oh the fun is about to begin....  update soon.

Loving this story! Can't wait to see Sessh!

Such an amazing chapter!!! Truly can't wait for more! Gosh I can't wait for her to see Lord Fluffy. 

Alright, now  things are beginning to get interesting. I liked that she finally found a friend in Yuki but it appears Yuki may never come to live since Kagome has been thrust back into the past. At least she has someone to protect that will encourage her to keep going on. She never could resist a child who needed her and this little one is inu. Coincidence? Hmm.

I'm glad she was able to see her tachi again and know they held no blame against her. I believe it also helped alleiviate that severe depression and drive to die. Taka will be a great help there.

Her next journey should be the west to hopefully find Sesshoumaru. He knew she returned to her time(in the anime series)as he was present when the well disappeared, but you took a different ending so will he be as receptive of her return and carrying an inu pup.? Curious....

Don't let things frustrate you so. Real life must go on before your writing ang posting. We readers understand this. If you allow RL to get to you your writing will  become more difficult. Just jot down a quick thought when you can and flesh it out if and when you get time for your writing. You are a good writer and the story is intriguing enough to keep us coming back. Be good to yourself and your family, you doing a great job.

JEN, alias Tana_san

P.S.  Love that this time around Kags has martial arts training and her powers are increased  and seem to do more than just zap and fizzle out. Makes her more stronger than her younger self.

Also that the negative influence from the Shikon that was the cause of her will to kill herself has been absorbed by the tachi. Now she can live and fight with a clear and determined mind and spirit.    Oh, l really like her having Taka so she's not alone, but has more reason to be aggressive if need be.

I love this story line and cant wait to see what the next chappies hold squeals high pitched

I cant wait for the next chapter!! Lots of love for this story! Beautifully written! 

Wow such a wonderful chapter I enjoyed it very much thank you....  I just wished I had more to read....  Update soon.

Wow that was a great chapter....  Kagome should learn how to heal it would make her life easier knowing all the trips she had ...  lol  anyways love the story...  

Update soon

Hi, so far I like what you have written. It's not exactly like any storyline/plot that I have read before. I can totally relate to Kagome's difficulty with dealing with what happened in the Sengoku Jidai(sp).

She has no one with whom she can relate to. Her family may love her and want so much to get her through it but they weren't there. They didn't see the carnage she did. All of her friends like a second family picked off one by one while she couldn't do anything quick enough to help. 

By the time her mind went into overload and she purified Naraku, it was too late to save the others. It seemed to me she wasn't in any mental state to make a true,  pure wish and perhaps the powers that be thought it best to just send her home. She didn't fulfill her job to destroy the jewel so no further  generations may someday be cursed with it and this poor pure hearted, loving, giving and caring woman was left with nothing but the ending horror of her tachi being murdered before any were awake enough to have a plan of attack.

She had her precious kit murdered in cold blood right as he clung onto his Kagome/mama. What mother woulded totally lose her mind...her sanity. Where were the kami that was made her the Shikon nno Tama guardian???

They sent her back to her era where she has had no idea if this jewel has been totally eradicated from this world to never cause this kind of destuction again. No phsyciatrist is willing to talk to her again and why should they? Her story is one Scifi movies are made of and only Kagome knows the truth.

Personally, I am looking forward to seeing this to it's fruition. I am hooked. I just hope that someone from the past(Sesshoumaru?) Has made it to her era. 

   JEN, alias Tana_san