Wow from reading the small plot summary definitely didn't think this was what would happen when I started reading .
I feel like you can take this whichever way. I am curious how this story unfolds...seems like there will be a lot of emotional baggage involved. This was a great read and I hope you expand on this interesting concept. Take care :)
CC (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Jun 2020
Very nice setup for endless possibilities. Though, I am also curious why Inuyasha seems so...casual with her. i hope you continue this story.
silence (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Jun 2020
Alright, alright! Pretty interesting and I can't wait for more! =)
D (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Jun 2020
Wow, what amazing start. I love the length of the chapters as well. I have so many thoughts about the start of this story its crazy. I am lost for words it was so good. Thank you and cant wait for the next chapter.
Neelixonee (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Jun 2020
Dark start. I'm looking forward to how this will be handled.
So many questions I want answered. Short summary caught my interest. Then recognized you and had to read. You didn't disappoint. Hope you post again soon. Really like it so far.
Faith (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Jun 2020
Oof this is intense. I hope you are able to continue it though. You've got a solid start here.
I hope you can continue this. I'm really intrigued by this unique concept.
Mecca (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
Definitely a different post canon situation than usual, and so heartbreakingly tragic. There are many questions I hope will be answered, but other than that, I think this is a great start, well written and steadily paced. I am so curious to know what happened to Kagome, and what she's been up to for the last 13 years. What has Inuyasha been up to? Why didn't he come see her? Was he able to and just didn't? They seemed to know about her (him and Kouga) that they went in search for her. Something is fishy. Also what Sesshoumaru has been up to, if he has mates or been with anyone, personal details. I definitely want to read more.
susie (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
this is so intruiging and interesting. i love the characterizations. i'd like to see what happens!
So many possibilities with this story. I am really interested in how Kagome found herself in that particular development. Will the demons discover the culprit and 'deal' with him in their own way?
I'm also curious why Inuyasha didn't approach her sooner - did he know she was alive, even? It appears he did, but I have an idea why (his home is a bit cramped...)
Fantastic start! I look forward to more!
I really like this story. I hope you continue it.
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