That was heartbreaking.  Yet so powerful 

I usually don't leave reviews, but I feel like this piece was something else. i havent been affected like this with reading fanfiction in a while (it takes a lot for me to get worked up) but reading this short story just hit me differently. I went and hugged my partner and told them how much I loved them afterwards. The raw emotions are so real and devastating, but beautiful at the same time. I think there is nothing worse than having the love of your life be taken away from you so suddenly AND them not knowing the true depth of your affections for them before their passing. I felt that you captured that with their silent exchange with just enough subtlety, but it was still there. 

Thank you for sharing. 

Cheesy? Not at all!

Look I remember when it was popular to make fun of Titanic. It was so unbelievably popular back in its day, and anything popular... Well you know how that goes.  Really it's a brilliant movie from the romance to even the attention to the steam engines and turbines. (let me stop there because I was one of those people who was OBSESSED with everything Titanic, not to mention young Leo. Lord knows my VHS set didn't get a full day rest for an entire YEAR when it was available on home video.

What I'm trying to say is I enjoyed this. It's only cheesy if your heart isn't in it and that's not what happened here.

You need to listen to more songs and write about them, because this is phenomenal. 

I also love you and hate you (jk about the latter). I took up your dare and listened to both songs while I re-read this. Needless  to say, I think I need a few days to recuperate. And a new box of tissues. 

you really nailed it on the head With the feels on this one. Great work!

It's okay. I'm okay. It's not like I turned into a sobbing mess or anything. Now if you would excues me!

='(

I cried. Takes a good bit to make me do that, but I legit cried. So heartwrenchingly beautiful and sad. You can really feel the depth of grief and despair here, and it hurts so good. Very nice and a job well done!

Absolutely, heartwrenchingly beautiful!!!  Tear worthy? How about a river of tears and a few sobs to boot! I know EXACTLY how Sesshoumaru feels as I lost my husband of 38 years July 4th, 2016 and 4 years later, I still haven't moved on and I know I never will as HE was my soulsmate.

I lost him from Hepatitis C we didn't know he had and it was just too late for the drugs to do their job.  Commercials had just started shortly before his death to let the public in on a deadly disease that no one is ammune to. Like AIDS it gotten through blood transfer. Syptoms feel like the beginning of flu until toward the end when yellowing of the eyes among symtons are detected. 

We are in a time when these viruses (like Corvid 19) mutate and are difficult to find absolute cures. Be safe, be aware, take precautions suggested and take a test if symtons persist. It's only your life... and those you may come in contact with. Stay heathy... You are loved!

Thank you for the one shot and sorry if I turned it into a lecture. OUR LIVES MATTER, every life. You are loved!!!

Ghost may have been cheezy to some people, but I agree, the last scene made the whole movie. At least Sessh and Kagome with Rin's help was able to have their final goodbye, I just wish Kagome could have stayed longer than just those few short moments. I'm a real sap for romance and I miss his kiss. 

Time for meds and sleep. 

JEN