Ugh. I just love the way you write Kagome. You really bring out her warm and accepting nature and it just makes my heart go pitter patter. She is just so accepting and nice and precious and UGHHH. So beautiful.
Reading from Ah-Un's POV is SO interesting. And she's almost like a guardian figure for Sesshomaru and they way she describes Kagome. *kisses fingers* beautiful. Kagome is warmth. Ahhhh, I am so happy the dragoness approves. XXD
19. And I've never consciously drew in that conclusion about Sesshomaru adopting things to protect like Kagome does. Sesshomaru does keep interesting company, doesn't he? A human girl, a low-born demon, strictly speaking, we never see how he came with Jaken but he certainly doesn't need to keep him. And the fact that you had him connect with Kagome because she wants to keep Shippo? THEY BOTH HAVE SOMETHING TO PROTECT AND THAT IS JUST SO PRECIOUS AND BEAUTIFUL.
21. THIS SENTENCE. THIS. SENTENCE. "A human custom the young master wanted to respect for the sake of his soon-to-be mate." Sesshomaru wanting to respect Kagome's human side is just so precious to me. I had to pause and take in that sentence. OMFG.
23. "less he decided to sit on her belly to warm the egg." - I suddenly have a need to see this.
Woop woop! I was totally a bit confused when I first started this but I got more and more excited as I read on. Baby Sesshomaru is SO FREAKIN' CUTE and you write him so well?! Like you have the CUTEST mini Sesshomaru. He is just so innocent and sweet and adorable AND YET HE IS STILL HIMSELF??? How do you do it?! And he is so curious! AHHH I just want to cuddle his preciousness forever.
I'm sad this is over now! It was one of the sweetest fics I've read, and I love how such a huge sense of family was woven throughout. Still so unique to have Ah-Un's perspective. I loved all the little moments, I love Ah-Un's quirkly and snarky observations. I really loved how we got a glimpse of Sesshoumaru in his childhood and then his developing relationship with Kagome. It was so fun seeing very real moments in a relationship from the dragon's perspective. LOVE all the baby stuff. This last chapter esp. and how in the end Ah-Un is broody and wants another of her own. And three cheers for the image of Sesshoumaru holding a newborn!!! Lovely job, VS. Thank you for adding such a sweet fic to the SessKag fandom!
Hahahahaha, they're hiding! That is too funny. I love how this is like a flashback to his childhood. Such a kid thing one would do with a pet. But here we have Sesshoumaru noping out with his dragon. Love it.
Sheesh, VS. Whip my emotions back and forth in 100 words why don't you. I was breaking for Rin, and the sheer elation with that last sentence!
Oh my gosh, the idea of girl time is precious. I love that. And I love how Ah-Un is back to "I'm keeping her." lol
Made me smile! Thank you!
Lauren (Chapter 28) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
So sweet! Ah Uh caught baby fever. At least Kagome's daughter will have someone to play with.
Such a cute random story.
Lauren (Chapter 27) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
Mood swings can be startling. ???? At least they can hide together
Lauren (Chapter 26) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
Poor Rin, feeling unwanted. Of course Sesshomaru still loves her!
Lauren (Chapter 23) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
LOL Sesshomaru sitting on her stomach would be hilarious, but she answered her own question. Silly dragon
Lauren (Chapter 21) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
That's sweet. To let her take part in the wedding, let alone having one, shows so much emotion and importance on Sesshomaru's part
Lauren (Chapter 20) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
How sweet and romantic.
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