I enjoyed the first chapter!  I’m looking forward to seeing where you go with the next one!  Has she been dreaming about him for a while or is this new?  

Omg that was amazing! Bravo!! 

This was awesome! Detailed and hot hope you continue writing

Wow! This is great! I can't wait to read more from you. Thank you! ????

Great opening act but this should be rated MA. Can't wait to read your next chapter.

I liked it and I hope you take it further and make a chapter story out of it. I think it was very well done. Not overly played out and rather tastefully done.