Reviews for Noise of Rain by Jafndaegur

KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Mon 29 Jun 2020

Such interesting twists and turns... can't wait to see where this goes


VS (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Jun 2020

Hello,

you spin a really interesting tale Jaf! <3 Two chapters into the story and I still can't say what is going on. XD The element of confusion is adding to the appeal though.

I love to read an independent and somewhat badass Kagome, she is more than just a jewel detector. The question remains wherever the darkness inside of her is something that controls her or if it can coexist with her purity and is a part of her just like the concept of yin and yang.

I liked how you dig deeper into Sesshoumaru's character in the 2nd chapter! The way he reacted to the un-Inuyasha-like behaviour says a lot of about the way he sees his half-brother. Inuyasha has no need to grovel when asking him for help.

That he was instantly worried about Kagome's wellbeing said a lot about him too, especially the what-if's that followed. What if he had told her about the darkness he felt? Sesshoumaru is not one to second guess his decision, by doing it now he shows how much he can care about others. I liked that. I also liked how he didn't promise Rin to find Kagome. More like he would do whatever he can, but he can't promise; a very nice detail.

Good job!

I'm looking forward to your next update.


KEdakumi (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Jun 2020

I wonder what has happened.... can't wait to find out.

 Question though, what is with the "outragers drive me nuts"?


S4toonee (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2020

This is a fantastic start. I'm already hooked.


Martha (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2020

Hey there! 

I like those dark thoughts Kagome has and I kind of hope that she becomes a dark creature or even better a youkai.. :-)

 

Hopefully read you soon :)) 

 

Bye


Martha (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2020

Jennifer (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 May 2020

What a twist! Please update again!


SmilingFool (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 May 2020

Wow that was intense...  I liked the dark theme something new but wicked as well...  update soon

 


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