Reviews for Dinner Service by SHORTFRY

Niomi (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2020

Wow! Considering all the other work of yours that I loove, cant believe you ventured here Lol this definitely made me feel yuck!! I rarely ready dark fics that is truly, seriously DARK. Not like.. smutty dark. My god. Obviously, everyone has their limits and taste for the dark arts (like the previous review), but I totally see where you were going. Stories don't always go on the direction we want and the writer has no obligation to give us, even if it's a hint, of satisfaction. Hence the warning of this story: DARK!! I definitely had to cleanse my palate, pun intended, after this one. But good job! Very well written


Letty (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 May 2020

I like dark fics if they have a decent plot and are written well. I'm not a big fan of stories that merely depict gore as slavishly as modern gore films. Is chapter three the end or will she at least vaporize some of her tormentors with her reiki before she dies? 

 

I get it that humans are vastly weaker than youkai, but there's no payoff to a reader if Kagome just lies there like a lump to get sexually assaulted by her own body parts then sliced off into pieces for Sesshoumaru to eat. I don't understand the way you linger on the assault either.

 

I'm sorry but this left a bad taste in my mouth.

 

 

 

 


Marquisha (Chapter 3) - Sat 23 May 2020

So freaking gruesome, but I can't stop reading it.  People with holy powers are a delicacy?  I don't know about y'all but Naraku the chef and Bankotsu the butcher sounds sexy to me!  Another chapter please!

 


SmilingFool (Chapter 3) - Sat 23 May 2020

Wow, never thought Naraku would cook her hand to give it too Sesshomaru.   I though about coating her in her juices and having them eat her raw for a savory taste bbq human doesn't look like it tastes so well....  Anyways, I like where this may go.  Update soon.


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