you were really able to do a lot with only a little. i loved it, and you got me wanting more!!
Short, sweet, sexy. I love how it focuses on the rising tension between them. What Kagome is feeling there. How Sesshoumaru is making it happen. There is a definite air of her being stuck in that uncertain, new place, and he knows it and is maximizing what he can there to draw here in. Well done!
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