A beautiful and heartwarming drop, Dross! *sobs* I really enjoyed reading a few chapters where the brothers were the main focus, they deserve it! <3 To apologise is not always an easy feat to accomplish, I guess especially not for Sesshoumaru! I'm proud of him! I loved how he didn't searched for any excuses and left the decision whether they are going to start anew or not to Inuyasha. *sigs* The boys have matured so much. You are doing great with character growth!
VS (Chapter 232) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
I'm going to use the words another reviewer already stated: cathartic.
Letting everything out of one's system is the first step to be able to move on! Both know where they stand now and that's a huge accomplished considering their relationship consistet of fighting only.
silence (Chapter 234) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
YES! YES! YES! I like that these updates were mostly about the brothers and an apology that was long overdue! Something that we never got in canon! And I like that Sesshomaru allowed Inuyasha to vent out all his anger and frustration, it needed to be done. I was just so happy reading all this! I'm sorry, I'll leave you alone about this now. I just have a lot of thoughts and feelings about this. Well done!
VS (Chapter 231) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
And here comes the favourite of all my favourites! This is a huge step for the brothers. Their relationship is very fragile and they will both have to work on it. I don't know if you noticed yourself but the nose bumb is symbolizing exactly this! By teaching Kagome the nose bumb, he set the stage for Sesshoumaru's next move who used the nose bumb as well! You are a genius!!! <3
Sesshoumaru's last words have me crying. All the feels!!!
VS (Chapter 230) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
A wonderful chapter! The change in POV was nicely done and Inuyasha's perspective is mirroring the reader's thoughts: we are all like wtf just happened??? XD And I can see how finding acceptance in his brother's eyes is too much for him to handle. Most of us are overhelmed right now. LOL
VS (Chapter 228) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
Even Sesshoumaru needs time to think and analyse situations on his own. And even though it might make Kagome uncomfortable since she doesn't know what's going on in his head, she accepts his need to be alone. They truly have a wonderful relationship.
And I like how you used these 2 chapters to build up tension.
VS (Chapter 226) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
And that's one if my favourite chapters in this drop! I just love how Sesshoumaru can't stop himself from touching her, while at the same time being worried and insecure if she's accepting of his culture. The feels, Dross! <3 He is overhelmed and I love it.
VS (Chapter 224) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
Haha, you are probably the first to write about a swooning Sesshoumaru! A really nice touch! Joking aside though, I like how you show how much Sesshoumaru is affected by Kagome's action. And what different forms intimacy has.
VS (Chapter 223) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
It's just wonderful to be witnessing their growing relationship. They start to understand each other by reading their body language. That sort of communication is only possible if you pay closely attention to each other and know each other well enough to understand the subtle shiftings.
I love how your work with such details! <3
LadyEsh (Chapter 234) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! I think I've said this about a dozen times now but your writing gives me life. I am constantly amazed by your capability to portray deep emotions in such short snippets.
I was looking forward to Sesshomaru's reaction to the nose brush but the Inu-Sess hello stole my heart!!! And the reconciliation! I look forward to future chapters.
Keep up the good work! And thank you to VS as well! Stay healthy <3
Lillmaru (Chapter 234) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
I never expected that to lead to their reconciliation.
This last group of chapters had me tearing up. So good!
Hola me encantó desde un principio la historia, la leí antes y ahora estoy esperando a que la vuelvas a terminar para leerla completa...y se me hace tan difícil, pero es mejor así, me encanta lo que escribes y siempre entro a tu perfil a leer tus historias,eres genial
VS (Chapter 219) - Wed 27 May 2020
Awh, I think I already told you how much I love your portrayal of Inuyasha in this one! Kagome is lucky to have such supportive men around her. The nose bu.ping was super sweet! Maybe she will nose-bump Imuyasha too?
VS (Chapter 211) - Wed 27 May 2020
*squeeaaalss* He KNOWS! He KNOWS! That makes their relationship even more beautiful! He will be patient and let her sort things out, he will be supportive and lead the way when she needs a leader.
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