Hahahahahaha nothing like being interuppted trying to get some in a hospital, very funny I could not stop laughing... Great so far kep going I wanna see how kag and Koug get out if that.
That was so unexpected. I like this. Thank God it's not one of those "Inuyasha gets caught cheating on Kagome with Kikyo" plots. Her own mother?!!!! This is very good.
Zyren (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Oct 2008
i like the way you write, though i admit i wasnt quite sure what was up with InuYasha when he first got to the door and i would have been seriously pissed if whatever guy i was dating woke me up at 3am to confess to cheating on me, there would have been hell to pay!! but so far so good i look forward to the next chapter.
Zyren (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Oct 2008
WHOA! WHOA! WHOA! I think i just got hit by a friggin train! that was the last thing i could have possible expected! wow talk about blind siding your audience, good job, kudos to you.
Just one minor note, you mispelled Inu-Yasha a few times but other than that good job, im not trying to be ugly but i know others can and will be over something so minor! love it though!!
LC Rose (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Oct 2008
Wow. Didn't expect that ending of chapter two. Very unexpected.
Inulovely383 (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Oct 2008
WOW! Nice Plot twist...Inuyasha sleeps with Kags mother...NICE! I'd be pissed too. Please update soon, I can not wait to see how you write Sess into this. I love your story, please continue and again...update soon.
alekat (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Oct 2008
I was not expecting that....but i like please continue!!
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