Love all your stories and this one is no different! Can't wait to see where it goes 

I love this! It's got a great combination of both creepy and kinda sexy.

Aww poor Kagome. Being broken up with, and especially because of controlling parents, is absolutely a tragedy for a 15 year old.

Oh?? Who’s the mystery customer??

Wow this employee is a jerk!

Omg and he swears he never ordered it ahhhh this is so creepy!!

“you owe her that much after being so rude.” You tell him!

So this guy must be with Eclipse then.

Wow I love how you’ve remade these scenes as the visual novel! Sometimes when canon is re-hashed it can be boring and redundant, but you kept it fresh and really made it feel like playing through a visual novel.  And I love the way Kagome gets lost in thought being annoyed with her character’s treatment while mashing X. So relatable lol

“Why’s that idiot always gotta protect me anyway? Can’t I do anything on my own?” Yeah girl!!

“That’s exactly what I was thinking” Oh god that’s creepy!!

“Pain.  Hot burning pain.  Why wouldn’t it end?” This whole bit is so intense!!

WHoaaaa Kagome is so powerful!!!

“The chest of the enemy.” !! Ohhh she’s done it now. He’s intrigued by her

“before I crumbled to my knees before Sesshoumaru.” Ahhh so intense!

Yessss he’s gonna train her!!!

Oh nooo poor Rin!

“Let’s bring out the real you Sesshoumaru” She knows him!! She understands him~

Wow these choices are rough. I don’t know how I’d choose.

“I told him one thing but my body did another” I like that

“Sesshoumaru shook his head but didn’t seem as annoyed as he was before.” Aw, is he taking her feelings into consideration?

“Either become my vassal Kagome or die as a slave.” Oh shit!

He said her name! Awww

Gahhh this is so interesting I just want to keep reading!!

Aww of course Kagome sticks up for the shy one. Kagome is such a good~

“vanilla canon route” lmaooo

Yesss I love that you always feature Janis. Lmao at her calling Inuyasha her husbando 

“I had gramps lie to the school” Nice nod to canon~

Oho~~~ She got the dirty version!~

“I’m sure Sesshoumaru isn’t my type or whatever” You just keep telling yourself that Kagome lol

Oh Christ of course her apartment doesn’t have lighting

NO MEMORY CARD OMG

Oh god he’s REALLY ANGRY fuckkkk

Ahhhhhhhh I need to know what’s gonna happen omg omg

This is such a unique angle for a fanfic and I’m so creeped out but intrigued!!

great story  

like your take on the story  looking forward to more

I really like the premise! Looking forward to the next update  :)

Oh shiiiiiiiiii-! 

As someone who miiight be obsessed with otome vn's and creepy pastas this is up my alley. 

I'm hyped for this! 

Hot daaaamn I knew tht scene would give me the shivers. Not the good kind too, its the kind that makes me think someone's watching me on an empty, dark street at night. So psyched to see where exactly this will all lead to