Need more updates and more lemon in the next chapter please

I love this story!  I can't wait for the next chapter, whatever will Kagome do?

Oh boy...things are getting heated. How is she going to manage this, I wonder? Great chapter. I wasn't sure I was going to like this but you are telling a great story. I can barely wait for the next chapter. 

God this is such a good story line I love the whole game turn reality plot pls update soon!?!

i want some juicy chapter for the next updates , pretty please :)

That sounds like a pretty nice place. Not bad for a creepy video game prison lmao

“he used to sit by the well waiting for you” aww poor Sesshoumaru

“Rin lives here too, of course, the villagers call her a princess” awww!

“Sesshoumaru of all people would go to such lengths to make you happy.” Awww it really is sweet. It’s not his fault he’s a video game character going along with some creepy programming.

“but I was here first” ahhh I was wondering how she was going to handle that. She’s not wrong.

“so in a dramatic fashion her mom cut the power to her bedroom forcing the game to turn off.” Christttttt

“and instead of searching or doing anything I was playing a stupid video game” lol yeah I wondered about that too. Though I definitely understand being sucked into a story to the point of ignoring reality

“this is the craziest dream I’ve ever had.” Yeesh Kagome is really in denial, but who wouldn’t be tbh

Ahhh so they can communicate without the others understanding. That’ll be helpful

“my brother’s whore” holy shit don’t be rude oh my god

“My brother and his woman are not a concern for you.” Yikesss

“You’re not real” Gurllllllll

“he used the back of his hand to strike her across the face.” OH HELL NO

“I did not wish to strike you.” Didn’t you though?? That’s some ‘you made me hit you’ bullshit hell no

“We’re going to return to the bedroom and you won’t be leaving until this ‘lapse’ of yours ends.” Oh fuck. Why is that actually kind of hot tho- I mean what?

Oh boy...this is not good. 

Oh no!

So now she is part of the game. Through the tv instead of the well. I hope there is more to come. What has Janis been up to?

I'm really having fun with this and looking forward to seeing where this goes. 

“ripped the disc out all together while it was still spinning” Nice detail.

“The voice she heard on the other side of the phone was not her mom.” Oh god oh god

Holy shit dramatic much? Eclipse please get a better hobby than forcing teenagers to play video games at gunpoint omg

“there was also underlying tones of hurt” poor Sesshoumaru ;-;

“You might have the controller, but this is my life.” Oh no poor virtual Kagome ;-; 

HER OWN VOICE ?????

“The very outfit Kagome was wearing at that moment.” FUCKKKKKKK

THOSE AREN’T OPTIONS

“Cursed sacred jewel,” he ignored her, “I wish for Kagome to be mine.” FUCKKKKKKK

“She wasn’t in her apartment.” Fuckkkkkk

That’s gotta be weird seeing Janis still as her middle school aged self. And somehow even creepier. Not as creepy as a little kid, but still creepy.

Fuck so is Kagome gonna have to actually conquer the jewel in this then?

“Get over it” Damn. Cold, Kagome XD “Any time Kikyo falls off a cliff it’s a red herring” She’s not wrong tho

“she’d played the visual novel all through the night” oops lol 

“just one more hour” is such a big mood. It’s always a lie hahaha

“whispered a warning to me before shielding me with his body” aww Sesshoumaru is secretly protective

“lost all composure as I interpreted such a look to mean disappointment” oof, poor Kagome

Aw I like that she’s getting caught up in the story. “It’s not like we had the opportunity to practice and figure out our power.” Exactly!

“I quickly reached for my quiver and pulled the arrow through my bow as though it’d become instinct” Do it do it do it

“it nor you will take her from me.” Eeeee so sweet

“She wasn’t going to apologize for the script making her too weak” Yeah girl!

“Give and take.  That is what you told me this relationship was to be Kagome.” Yesssssss he respects the standard she set~

“I would have never let Kagome be alone in such a position.” Yesss protective boy~~~

“it was heartwarming to see Sesshoumaru take care of her and she wanted more of that content” Helllll yeahhhhhh

“just wanted to be a good little boy and do what his parents told him.” Oof. Yikes Hojo.

“I wish to discuss this ‘give and take’ relationship you once spoke of.” Ohohohoho is it gonna happen??

“She was going to be late for school because she wanted to see a sex scene” lololol

OH MY GOD her uniform is all sexily ripped that’s hilarious I love it

“sex scenes in visual novels are always so bad they are almost funny” it’s true!! XD

“As for how we will proceed you will relax.  Let me enjoy you.” That’s hot that he’s taking control

“but I guess all I can do is enjoy the journey with you” Yep, just sit back and enjoy the kinky entertainment you asked for lmao

Oh god the confused panty ripping trope! And I oop XD

“It was as though I was leaving behind who I used to be.” Oh my goddd you’re killing me with these tropes!

“What happened to your neck?” I’M SCREAMING OH GOD OH GODDDDDD

This a great story to read!!! Can't wait how this plays out !! 

I'm not a gamer, so I'm not up on some of this stuff but this seems like fun and I want to read it. 

Very suspenseful and creepy.

Wow! I've gotten my fair share of bad endings but this is super creepy. At least she didn't do a Naraku route o_o. 

OMG this is amazing!!! I love the story and how origional the plot is turning out to be! AHHH, your story was a god send as I am on a break from writing at the moment but was in desperate need of something to read and these few chapters helped me de-stress by leaps and bounds. Keep up the good work! 

Omg that ending creeped me out! Aaaaahhh!!!! 

I can handle most yanderes, I don't know if I can handle Sess being one o_o. 

“Eri would think she photoshopped it or something.” Oof, ain’t that just the way

Omg no Kagome you don’t just keep playing clearly cursed games!! (I totally would too tho bc I have no sense of self-preservation XD)

“That raw anger in his eyes I could understand.” ;-;

“goosebumps began to travel down Kagome’s arm” Ah so she does have some sort of self preservation instinct lol

“Do you fear me now?” ;-; Poor Sesshoumaru

“knowing that a man desired me to that degree lit a fire in my heart” Oh boy.

“refused to believe a mentally healthy now grown woman could have these feelings” Good girl.

“Why? Because she wanted to know the response to the first one.” Hahaha relatable

“I’ve already destroyed the well.” Oh shit

“it was kind of hot to have an attractive supernatural creature be so controlling of her” monster bae vibes~

“She cut the power in the house to punish me for playing this game” FUCK FUCK FUCK ABORT ABORT

“The cursor was on the third option when that happened.” ABORT ABORT omg my eyes are watering from fear

“YOU CaNNot PICk this OPTion in this MOMent!  He wILL not UNDersTAND. Try agaIN.” WHATTTTTT OH GODDDDDD

“resign myself” Oh godddd

A VOICE OH GOD

OH GOD OH GOD OH GODDDDDDD

Can't wait to read what happens next!