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Drosselmeyer (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Jan 2020

OMGS. Sadness made me, well, sad. But Sesshoumaru starting to cry and not realizing it and then Inuyasha's reaction about did me in. Brilliant!


Drosselmeyer (Chapter 4) - Mon 20 Jan 2020

Holy...Innocence is so dang sweet.


Drosselmeyer (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Jan 2020

So thoroughly entertained by this it isn't even funny. Really wondering which one it was that saved her though!


Mecca (Chapter 7) - Sun 19 Jan 2020

That's sooo interesting, to be able to be privy to Sesshomaru's fantasies, I bet Kagome is going to go over every interaction they've had in the past because of what she now knows. That's not awkward at all! Lol.... I love what's happening so far. Please keep it coming! 


Lady T (Chapter 7) - Sat 18 Jan 2020

Love this story would love to get some updates


susie (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Jan 2020

I was almost late to work because I had to read this first!

The smut was hot, of course.  But I also really liked both scenes with Sloth.  The cuddle time was super cute, and I liked how playful he was during the little wrestling match.  He's so laid back and chill, it's almost like he has a suave playboy thing going.  Its fun to see what Sess would be like if he were cool lol.

Its fun to learn what the emotions know, and also to watch kags try to come to terms with what she is learning.

As always, I'm on the edge of my seat and can't wait to see what happens next!

Keep up the good work!  Write on!


Anna Grey (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

Gosh, your story just keeps getting better and better!!!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

How fascinating! Fantasy made some excellent points about her existence, also, I'm curious about 'lover boy' though I have a suspicion. Really enjoying this storyline!  


Bar___time (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

I honestly love your stories.  I have read every single storie twice and all you oneshots various times.  You are an incredible writer. I can not wait to see where you take this storie. 


beachvilla (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

Fun story. Can't wait to see what happens, especially once she gets out. 


Shelley (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

I really enjoy reading this! 


Redleopord (Chapter 6) - Thu 16 Jan 2020

LMAO! Make me? Oh my Lord Sesshomaru. I love this! Keep up the good work!


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Thu 16 Jan 2020

Oh my, he is going to be a handful. This was a very interesting chapter. Repression is playing a losing hand and his grip is starting to unravel. Thanks for updating. I love this story. 


susie (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Jan 2020

So, I'm afraid I have a bone to pick.

 

I noticed you chose to drop an "F-Bomb" in your story, and I'm afraid I have to take issue with that.

You see, you elected to rate your story M for mature.  So, as a mature individual, I expect a certain considerations in regards to that rating.

Though I am not a minor, I am dating a 17 y/o (I'm in a state where that's legal, so don't worry).  And as such, I am constantly surrounded by teenagers.  And let me tell you; these kids cuss up a storm.  F-bombs...C-words.. and don't get me started on the graphic sexual acts they discuss and take parts in.

My point is, these teenagers expect a certain amount of cursing in their fanfiction, and I am afraid you have fallen short.  If you wish to keep your M rating, I only ask that you achieve the minimum quota of 4 "F-Bombs" per chapter.  Or, as an exchange, at least 2, and your characters must progress to more sexually explicit behavior.  You are the artist, I shall let you decide.

If you fail to meet your quota, I must insist that you lower your rating to a T.  Mature individuals demand mature content, and teasing us without delivering is unacceptable.

You are obviously very talented, and I know you will do the right thing.  I look forward to reading your filth.  Thank You.


Tilayha (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020

Ohhh like this chapter very very much. Sesshoumaru crying, fantasy Kago meeting real Kago, and a lazy sesshoumaru. Wonderful : )


susie (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Jan 2020

Brilliant!  Inspired!

 

Ok.  There is just so much to like about this.  I'm getting more and more into this fic, and i cannot wait to see what happens next!

Thanks so much for writing!


Sarah (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020

This is awesome. I love this idea. Yea i remember watch the tern titan show on this. It was one of my favorites with raven. But i have to say i really love what you have done here. So much fun to read. I am really enjoying it. I bet its ao much fun to play with.


Mecca (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020

Love the concept that Sesshomaru has a fantasy version of Kagome locked within his psyche xD I hope Kagome can escape soon so she can ask the real Sess what in tarnation is going on. I'm spellbound! Thank you for the update. 


Blommie8 (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020

This story still make me amazed. I never thought this kind of story. Does any movie like this in real live? Or anime maybe...its been so long i haven't seen anime again. Im not fond with anime mecca time/something like battle things. I like the old anime. Inuyasha, sailormoon, etc. They have power but still have some love story too. Ah...sorry for the rambling. But i really like this story....make it til the end please.....


Neelixonee (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020

I sometime wonder if Sesshoumaru hides laziness by having the whole "I do what I want" attitude.  Like, sinetging isn't " worth his time" hut really he's just lazy.


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