Probably that’s the best thing that Kagome can do right now, learn more about medicine to help his friends from the past. And maybe buy some medicine and stuffs to try to heal Sango. On the other side, Sesshomaru, well… he’s fighting whit some repressed feelings.
So glad to see this continue. Poir Sesshoumaru, I really want to see him work through the trauma. Thank you!
These chapters have so many layers. Thanks so much for updating.
YES! I was so excited to see this update! Loved the description of Sesshoumaru's response to the aftermath. He definitely seems to be dealing with something he's repressed. Through your writing it's easy to see how he's trying to process the why behind what he's feeling and that he's feeling it intensely. I really liked the description of his pride and guarding it with a "viscious jealousy." Very apt for him. I'm interested to see how his past and Kagome end up moving toward each other. Kagome obviously feels the weight of the world right now, and I can only imagine what her response to Sesshoumaru's demons will be. Very much looking forward to more!
Just popping back in to say this story is constantly on my mind! You got me hooked. Can't wait to see more!
Oh man! This is a hard topic to write and I have to say that you're doing a very good job here. This felt so real for me cuz you add so many details. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
I look forward to seeing more of their interactions. I hope you write Sesshoumaru's perspective of this scene. Do you have any idea how long this story will be? i really like stories that go into deep psychological understanding of Sesshomaru's thoughts and actions.
This is such a fascinating and painful take on Sesshomaru and his past. I am intrigued to see where you move this story!
I enjoy stories that really delve into characters lives and psyches. I think it will be refreshing to see the development of both characters considering Kagome's somewhat broader scope of phycology. Even just touching on small things like testing his hand... That's a small detail but it peints a story, and definitely is uneasy. Thank you!
Back to add: the red lamp imagery is poignant. It's easy to clearly see it as you read about it. I can't say why right off, but there's something very "The Glass Menagerie" about the whole thing, and I think it perfectly fits into the mood your creating around Sesshoumaru's psychological and emotional (though repressed) responses to things.
This is very good and well-written. I'm looking forward to more! I like the little details included, like how Sesshoumaru was clenching and unclenching his hand. This is a hard subject to write about, but it's obvious you'll do it well. There's a lot of room for fantastic character development too with how it's been set up.
Favorited!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
The story is already engaging, and you have my attention!
Sorry...lots of typo for my review
I like the way you write....i read to story that make mw comfortable... Not make me feel weird, cringy or um...something childish. So the first chapter for me is important....it's okay for me if the story didn't have happy ending. As lo as the story worth to wait and read....lease keep going!! I hope there will be romance for sesskag.
I really appreciate the in depth authors note. And the first chapter was amazing! Told a lot and kept my interest - I can’t wait to read more!
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