I was able to sense the atmosphere and excitement of being able to go to school, her desperation of trying to find the castle, Sesshoumaru distrust, and distaste of Kagome, and the entertainment for Toga.
You were able to give the reader a vision of the grounds. The experience of the effect of the school on Kagome. Hopefully, she will stay awale enough to find out she is a Miko.
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. It was a joy to read.
I love it already.
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