Reviews for Pompeii by bookgirl813

Taylor (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Nov 2019

I love this idea but the classics student in me is crying lol


insomniac_amy (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Aug 2019

Great read! I love your take on what might have happened to Pompeii.  The plot was good and well written and the love scene hot and steamy. I really enjoyed reading it and have already added it to my favorite story list.


Kelly (Chapter 2) - Sat 27 Jul 2019

Such a uniwue and interesting story!  Thanks for sharing your creativity with us!


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 22 Jul 2019

What a terrific short story! I love the totally different take on their story. Yep! No more sacrifices, that one blew the top off. Cheers!


DemonicAngel91 (Chapter 2) - Mon 22 Jul 2019

This was defently a twist on the what happened to the old romen town. I really loved you story and would like to read more from you soon.


hana sora (Chapter 2) - Sun 21 Jul 2019

i hope there will be a next chapter for this story


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 2) - Sat 20 Jul 2019

A perfect and gruesome ending. When I was a teenager, my homeroom teacher showed me a video of Pompeii's prosperity and ruin, and I admired the brilliant civilization achieved by the ancient people. Clean pavement, stone ovens, and the grains of fossilized grain indirectly showed the lives of the people of Pompeii before they were covered in lava. It was really enough to forget the title of the video, Pompeii's Last Day. But even during the time when almost all the students, including myself, admired the wisdom of the ancient people, their unexpected, miserable end was coming diligently. Perhaps it was only the heartless heavens and the gods who expected the fall of a city. I had nightmares for a few days as I watched those who couldn't escape from the disaster-stricken land become fossils. And I prayed that the innocent people who died unjustly would be happy in heaven. I recalled the day I saw the video while reading this chapter. Just as the eruption of Vesuvius 2,000 years ago took away almost all the lives in Pompeii at the time, this wonderful fiction, too, would not have taken into account the innocence of the victims. Well, I think the real innocent are all Kagome's parents. Anyway, if all the people she loved were dead, it was an excellent choice to erase her memory. If not, there would have been considerable inconvenience to our favorite couple's happy marriage. Indeed, collective selfishness is often a frightening thing that can do to innocent people who disagree with the idea. This fiction made me feel like I was watching a sexy and instructive movie. The delicate and beautiful depictions kept me from taking my eyes off any paragraph of this fiction, and the scene of the disaster contrasted with the sex scenes reminded me of the heavyness and cruelty of the few sacrifices for the majority....Oh, I love this fiction with all my heart! I would say that I loved the time I was waiting for this chapter to be updated. Thank you for sharing with us the fiction that shows your creativity and talent. ♥♥♥


Keo (Chapter 2) - Sat 20 Jul 2019

Love the chapter!


guest (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Jul 2019
wow more please this sounds interesting

Haven (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Jul 2019

I can't wait for the next chapter!


Susy V (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Jul 2019

TO BE CONTINUED?! This is keeping me on edge. I want to see what the wrathful Sesshoumaru does


Keo (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Jul 2019

Can't wait for the next chapter!


Toni (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Jul 2019

really enjoyed your chapter  sorry that it's only going to be 2 chapters but looking forward to the next chapter


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Jul 2019

It is written with great interest and sophistication. Well, as everyone knows, it's rubbish to force a woman who doesn't like him by reason, no matter how well he has intentions. She must have been another victim of marriage unless she resisted until she inflicted minor injuries on him and discouraged him from forcing her. From the start, it appears that he did not have the ability to save her. Poor Kagome, and Akitoki's poor intellect. I expect her husband to punish Akitoki severely. It's the right disposal for a jerk who tried to abuse god's woman. :p :p


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