Reviews for Unknowingly Mated by Dani

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andreana (Chapter 9) - Thu 18 Apr 2019

cant wait for the conclusioon this is a great story i loved it!!!!!!


Pamelamoores (Chapter 9) - Thu 18 Apr 2019

I enjoyed this storyline very much!!!


Mistress (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Apr 2019

I LOVED this can not wait for you to do another. I love how you portrayed the characters the whole story was just great to me can't wait for the next one


Sally (Chapter 7) - Sat 13 Apr 2019

Poor Genkai, it's not his fault his dad doesn't like his mom but she seems to be taking it out on him.  I'm not sure how she was before her marriage but I almost feel sorry for her.  Almost, lost most of my sympathy when she stated murdering servents and attacked Maru.


Lauren (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

Wait. Sara isn't dead, but they just left her laying, extra-crispy, on the arena floor? She should be arrested or placed in the dungeon, or is she too damaged to even try to attack?

 

Wow, that was quick. LOL what a jump. I'm assuming you'll be wrapping this story up in the next couple of chapters now that they're official and have another on the way.  


Lauren (Chapter 8) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

Wait. She had made attempts on their lives and no one had looked into dismissing her from the residence halls? Did Maru inherit Sesshomaru’s tolerance to poison? Had Sara also tried to kill her own son in these attacks? 

 

Interesting how everyone conviened in Kagome's rooms and seem to.be loving with her for all intents and purposes. Happy to see Sesshomaru is more normal now. Maybe he will just take care of his wife all together and just tear down/burn the section of the house that Sara lived in... One can hope. 


Lauren (Chapter 7) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

Boy is Sara in for a rude awakening... How is it that she has any followers within the Shiro at this point? She's been miserable and venomous and really needs to be taken down a peg. 


Lauren (Chapter 5) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

I'm glad that Musashi took Kagome's rejection in stride instead of putting her out for not developing romantic feelings.

 

This story is going really well, but your jumps are making it so we miss some of the day to day that Sesshomaru goes through. It'd be nice to see this mistreatment that he speaks of or some of the other details we are skipping over. It feels like this is more of a push to get Kagome and Sesshomaru back together, but is the mark the only driving factor? 


Lauren (Chapter 3) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

LOL I think Kagome was in denial about her pregnancy. What valley is this that she's been searching for anyway? 

 

Wait... Is this the same Musashi that was a famed samurai who had a province named after him?

 

I wonder if the of the Inu-tachi will make an appearance? Demons don't seem to be very well known outside of Sesshomaru’s lands, but Inuyasha also doesn't seem to exist in this timeline. Are Kagome and Sesshomaru and Toga the only canon characters in this story? 


Lauren (Chapter 2) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

I understand that Sesshomaru doesn't like his wife, but he really didn't need to treat her so horribly...  Uncaring and mistreatment are two different things. Hoping he leaves her be from now on. 


Lauren (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

Interesting story so far. I wonder if Kagome will discover herself to be pregnant and what she'll do if/when that revelation occurs 


biancaharl (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

 Applause! Applause! Applause! Great work! Just loved it!


Ryo chan (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 Apr 2019

I literally could not put this down. I was even late to class.  You made every character yours with beautiful detail, and made me care. I adored there first night it was descriptive and you didnt make it all about one character or the other. 


SammyJams (Chapter 9) - Thu 11 Apr 2019

What an awesome story so far! I can’t wait to read more! 


maricela (Chapter 9) - Thu 11 Apr 2019

really love this story thank you.


insomniac_amy (Chapter 9) - Thu 11 Apr 2019

What a cute story. It immediately grabbed my attention and pulled me in. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job!


M.J. (Chapter 9) - Thu 11 Apr 2019
I have read your story without stopping for a moment. I liked it a lot. Thank you, and continue writing.

Toni (Chapter 9) - Thu 11 Apr 2019

Wow! This is one of the best story that I have read in a long while! What a treat! Please continue writing, you are a wonderful author!


Itsumademo (Chapter 9) - Thu 11 Apr 2019

this was marvelous! i loved every second of it <3 honestly i'm sad to have finished, i enjoyed being in the story so much, but it had a nice happy end and that's always something to be satisfied for ^-^ 

truly, thank you for your wonderful fic!


Crimson Rose (Chapter 9) - Thu 11 Apr 2019

This was such a sweet story, I loved it. Thank you for creating this world, it was written Well and I loved every second of it. I loved how you portrayed Sesshomaru and Kagome. I would love to read an epilogue or even a sequel. I hope to read another one of your stories some day!

 

- CR


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