Reviews for Cop Troubles by LibraCourt

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Midnight Cat (Chapter 6) - Fri 10 May 2019

Awesome update! A new look inside of what makes Kagome...Kagome! The interactions with Sesshomaru are amazing and the fact that he is willing to help her so much just makes my heart all warm and fuzzy! Can't wait for the next update! 


Neelixonee (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 May 2019

Getting to the meat of it now :}

 


Alison (Chapter 6) - Sat 04 May 2019

Wow. I hate her family. I can't even express my hatred in words just know that I hate them.


Alison (Chapter 5) - Sat 04 May 2019

I'm so glad she gets to keep him!


carita jervier (Chapter 5) - Fri 03 May 2019

So far I am loving this story. It's even more interesting as it's from sesshomaru's point of view. Love it keep updating. Great work.


Midnight Cat (Chapter 5) - Fri 03 May 2019

Ok, lets begin:

1.- WELCOME BACK WOMAN! Boy have I missed you! So glad to see that you are still alive!! And sharing your amazing talent none the less!!

2.- A new story? Call me tickled pink! I am beyond the stars! This is AWESOME!! So far the first 5 episodes have proven to be sooooo good!! I         love this new take on Inuyasha!! So original!!! Love the interactions between Kagome, Sesshomaru, and Inuyasha! I am salivating with                 anticipation for the next chapter! 

3.- Drama Lama with the Mamma? Don't sweat it! I have dealt with so much of that with my own, I could write horror stories if I wanted to.         One of those things I can't seem to get fixed. Oh well. I wish you luck and hope it doesn't cause you all the premature gray it has caused             me... But, Hey! Gray is in right now!!!  So maybe we are getting the fashion look for free and all natural! 

In all seriousness, welcome back!! Really happy to have one of my favorite writers back in here and with a super cool story!! Please know that I will be waiting for your updates like crazy, so please don't leave me here howling at the moon while I wait for you!! 


Carmen Kent (Chapter 5) - Fri 03 May 2019

I'm so glad you posted a new chapter. It was a breath of fresh air. 


Katrina Kee (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 May 2019

Yea! Another chapter!!! Thank you sooo much!!! I am interested in how Inuyasha labeled Kagura a whore for sleeping around, but Kagome wasn’t one.... didn’t like the thought that she would mess around with another woman’s man either. (Koga) Even if Ayame gave them her blessing. It’s just wrong morally and I cannot see Kagome being that way. It makes me wonder if somehow both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are wrong about Kagome sleeping around and with only Youkai males too. Oh well. The mystery that is Kagome will slowly be unraveled by Sesshomaru soon enough (or maybe not soon enough for me lol) Thanks again for the update!!!


LadyNita (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Apr 2019

This story gives me life!!!


VS (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Apr 2019

Hello,

first of all I want to thank you for the regular updates you gift us with! <3

It's really interesting to see how the story is progressing, especially how Inuyasha is developing! :D That dog is killing me!!! :) But I'm sure that Kagome will lead him to the right path - although the cursing will probably never end!

I also like the role Kouga is playing...a friend of both that could help them out to understand each other should there arise some communication problems. And I'm sure there will! ;)

I can't wait to learn more about Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's past!

 


Alison (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Apr 2019

I love that you write from Sesshomaru's POV! It makes your story unique. And don't be too down on yourself your story is really good!


FayeMegan (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Apr 2019

I really like it so far! I'll be watching for updates~


j (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Apr 2019

You're doing a great job with his perspective. I find it extremely interesting and different since not a lot of people write from his pov looking foward to more can't wait to see how long it takes Kagome to tame Inuyasha


Darkness living in Hope (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Apr 2019

Love love love this story! It’s completely different from your others (yes I have read all of them and I love them all dearly). I love how you changed things around. Hanyou are actually very smart animals that are still looked down upon in society in some ways just like Youkai have the same frame of mind when it comes to humans. And you make it work very well. 

I look forward to finding out more of Kagomes history and why she is the way she is and to watch the love bloom in between sesshomaru and kagome  


Alison (Chapter 3) - Tue 09 Apr 2019

I like how you put in the Inuyasha "SIT" thing. But I hope Sesshomaru doesn't compare Kagome to Rin too much. They're two different people and he should fall in love with her for her unique characteristics.  


Angela (Chapter 3) - Tue 09 Apr 2019

Ooohhh i’m really digging this no nonsense kagome hehe tho i wonder how she ended up that way. and will inu gain a humanoid form or will he stay as a dog? really liking this story so far! cant wait to read more :D


Alison (Chapter 2) - Sat 23 Mar 2019

I like your stories so I'm excited to read more of this one! 


Neelixonee (Chapter 2) - Sat 23 Mar 2019

I think Kagome's inteo was fun.  I used to work in a kennel and aggressive dogs typically just need time and patience to build trust.  Very neat way to intro InuYasha too.  I feel like, though very different, it is a truer way to display his character.  He isn't full demon and the idea that the functionality of changing to a humanoid form is reserved for a being with a higher power ties in with his inability to maintain control of his yokai in the actual series.  His being a dog allows a very different way to display characteristics and emotions, reactions that are truer of his personality than as a humanoid.  And the fact that he can communicate, even if only to other inu gives it a nice twist and challenge.  Leave it to Sesshoumaru to simplify ????


Nilee1 (Chapter 2) - Sat 23 Mar 2019

Your story has an interesting concept; doesn't Sesshomaru recognize Inuyasha as his half brother? 

I like your story: please update soon.


VS (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Mar 2019

Hello,

I'm happy to see that you are working on a new story. After reading and enjoying "Dream Child", "Prison Love" and "Second Chance Child" I can't wait to read this one too. You are an amazing writer!

The first few paragraphs that are kind of the epilog of this story were interesting. I liked that you described the different steps and events that mark the developement between the human and the youkai race.

I also liked how you worked in a few canon elements, especially the part with Rin! It's kind of sweet how jealous he was until he decided to take her for his own and how he is still trying to act in a way she would aprove of. 

The idea this whole story is based on seems promising! So I have no doubt that your new story will be worth reading!

But while the idea is absolute great your writing skills seem a bit rusty. And I'm not talking about the numerous grammar mistakes you did, but more of the style. Especially the first half of the chapter was kind of "tiring" to read. (Try f.e. to be more variable in the structure of the sentences.) I know that you can do better! And I'm sure that the more you work on your chapters the easier it will be to get into the flow again.

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 

 


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