Reviews for Cop Troubles by LibraCourt

Nilee1 (Chapter 2) - Sat 23 Mar 2019

Your story has an interesting concept; doesn't Sesshomaru recognize Inuyasha as his half brother? 

I like your story: please update soon.


VS (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Mar 2019

Hello,

I'm happy to see that you are working on a new story. After reading and enjoying "Dream Child", "Prison Love" and "Second Chance Child" I can't wait to read this one too. You are an amazing writer!

The first few paragraphs that are kind of the epilog of this story were interesting. I liked that you described the different steps and events that mark the developement between the human and the youkai race.

I also liked how you worked in a few canon elements, especially the part with Rin! It's kind of sweet how jealous he was until he decided to take her for his own and how he is still trying to act in a way she would aprove of. 

The idea this whole story is based on seems promising! So I have no doubt that your new story will be worth reading!

But while the idea is absolute great your writing skills seem a bit rusty. And I'm not talking about the numerous grammar mistakes you did, but more of the style. Especially the first half of the chapter was kind of "tiring" to read. (Try f.e. to be more variable in the structure of the sentences.) I know that you can do better! And I'm sure that the more you work on your chapters the easier it will be to get into the flow again.

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 

 


Tilayha (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Mar 2019

Added to my favorites list!


Moonlight Silk (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Mar 2019

Liking the story thus far. Update soon. I am waiting anxiously for Kagome's appearance in the next chapter or the one after that...


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