Reviews for First Days by Emma

crystal (Chapter 9) - Sat 23 Feb 2019

very cute. i'm enjoying watching the fallouts and them reconciling. seems like an actual relationship.


Orotami (Chapter 7) - Fri 25 Jan 2019

I love an emotional lovesick puppy Sesshoumaru! Can't wait for the next chapter


Dandie (Chapter 6) - Fri 18 Jan 2019

Love this story so far! Can't wait to see where it leads! I can't believe Sesshomaru did not even acknowledge her when he ran into her! Gah! <3


Orotami (Chapter 6) - Fri 18 Jan 2019

Sesshoumaru is royally going to screw up the next meet and greet. Maybe even call her a whore. He's horrible at that. Can't wait for the next chapter. We finally have adults on our hands! 


hana sora (Chapter 2) - Wed 16 Jan 2019

kagome why you are so stupid over your emotions. . sesshomaru just speak like that because he likes you #sigh


Orotami (Chapter 4) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

A sweet, invigorating tale. I can't wait to read more! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Mon 14 Jan 2019

Wonderful story and I love it already.

Very nicely written.  Kagome and Sesshomaru are made for each other.  They are so adorable.  Hope they can get it together soon before the obligatory teenage first love and heartaches...typical teen angsty stuff.   :|

I know this may sound like trivial nitpicking, but in chapter 1, you have Kagome at age 5 and then age 6 and Sesshomaru at age 9 years old when they first met.  Later in chapter 4, he is thinking back at how it's been 5 years that he and Kagome had been walking to and from school together since they first met.  That would make her 11 and him 14 but you have them as ages 13 and him 16.  She in middle school and he in high school, which would probably put him as getting ready to enter into his senior year.  That was how old I was going into my senior year in high school.  The timing and ages just seemed a bit off.  No big deal...I was just over thinking in passing.  Yeah, I'm one of those kinds of people, sorry to say.  LOL  :)

Great job and looking forward to more chapters soon!!!


Ree-san (Chapter 3) - Mon 14 Jan 2019

Kagome is pretty blind. How could she not notice over such a long period of time? Not really good friend behavior. I think she was taking his presence for granted  She still didn't really acknowledge that, only noticing when he protected himself from watching it happen and not catering to her anymore. Her age isn't an excuse really especially because she was so intuned when she was younger. I feel sorry for Sesshomaru. 


Coastin (Chapter 3) - Mon 14 Jan 2019

Cuuuuuute


Chrishonna (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jan 2019

This is a really cute story, I can’t wait for updates and to see how Kagome makes an impact on Sesshomaru‘s life.


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